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Mistress Fire

You are beautiful, like fire in the night, warming me with no boundry heating me with severity burning me right, encircling me with love danger delight, rattling my manhood's ******** lapping through circulation engulfing my might, How could I be in love with the wind, earth or water when I have you, my Mistress of Fire, Enchantress of my blood bud, of my dark dove, a flamed feathered rub you lick around my head of history using red and gold strokes to paint mystery supernatural seductress of bonfire therapy, I delve, I stoke you repeatedly with my masculine trunk, you spray sparks like a star in oval ******, catching you with my soul's hot prism we give our lust divine *****, price for thee, my heart's eternity you've drunk, You, a woman rediscovering love of song I, exploring rose ritual in your dawn, Muse and Poet, minx and hunk - J.A.B.

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/5/2014 2:47:00 AM

I'm back to read you, Justin. The imagery here is ablaze with passion. I feal the heat of your heart for your mistress. Amazing write.

Justin Bordner
Date: 9/6/2014 1:42:00 AM

I like it when you come to me in the night Eileen...Her fire is high with me, beyond subduing. J.A.B.

Jay Loveless

Date: 8/2/2014 10:01:00 PM

Erotic and passionate. As Js said, Magic Viagra haha. Your words hold a magic of seduction.

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/3/2014 2:47:00 AM

Happy that my magic moves into your pulse Jay...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/2/2014 5:08:00 PM

Passionate and in depth... Justin, one of my favorites. You write well. LVerlena

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/3/2014 2:43:00 AM

Thank you Verlena, I compose my love with gratitude and gambit. J.A.B.

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/31/2014 6:50:00 AM

Wow! This one certainly stirs the emotions of the reader, my friend!.... Beautiful, passion from your pen... Hugs... Arlene

Justin Bordner
Date: 8/1/2014 8:15:00 PM

Emotions can be so physical Arlene, the fire so spiritual. J.A.B.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/30/2014 10:55:00 AM

Dear Justin, This poem can be read as love's passion as well as the spark of fire. I had a fireplace at my last house and used to stare at the flames often. There is something mesmerizing about fires. As for the passion, you have a wonderful mistress, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/30/2014 2:12:00 PM

Fire, a life form that can comfort or kill, bathe or burn, stimulate or singe. I'm happy you like my fire Carolyn. Thanks for visiting. J.A.B.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/30/2014 3:00:00 AM

Wow Justin! Your mistress of fire is such a fascinating and inspiring fount to your poetic writes. She 'raises' you to heights of delight and satisfaction. You're lucky...and so is she! // paul

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/30/2014 3:10:00 AM

We live to burn Paul! Thanks for the great comment. J.A.B. AF&AM

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/25/2014 5:06:00 PM

Justin, extreme and beautiful. Your poem has color, and heat that burns for some I see. I think your poem has spunk, rhythm and flow. A dark dove, flying high in a world so vivid and free, where else can one find a muse. Every line is an expression, that leads to your one and only muse. Enjoyed, Linda

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/26/2014 2:08:00 AM

How could a Poet like me possibly love and treasure a Woman, and Muse who is anything less than extreme, extreme in her charm and extreme in genius. Thank you for being so beautiful Linda...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/23/2014 4:32:00 PM

Mistress Fire is the greatest title choice for the passionate flames ignited in each verse..Well done!!

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/23/2014 7:47:00 PM

Fire is so sexy, so very sexy. Mistress Fire is the truest description for the Woman that excites me most. Thank you for the love Charma...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/23/2014 3:38:00 AM

I am fascinated by the beautiful, raw imagery you invoke in every line. "you lick around my head of history using red and gold strokes to paint mystery supernatural seductress of bonfire therapy, I delve" Love that part- it's so very deep. Excellent piece Justin. Never fail to surprise me with your artful and fire-spurted translucent words. I'll be back to read again. Can't wait for more. : ) Always, Laura

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/23/2014 8:09:00 PM

Laura, you are an extremely sensuous Poetess, I love it when our fires touch...Justin

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2014 2:24:00 PM

- A really good and romantic love poem, Justin - How beautiful love can be!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/23/2014 2:28:00 PM

A most scintillating symbiosis Anne. Muse and fuel lighting the night of Heaven. J.A.B.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/22/2014 9:30:00 AM

Brillant description of a love affair here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/23/2014 2:22:00 PM

We shall consume each other in the fury and freedom of creative love Matthew, thank you. J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 7/20/2014 9:46:00 PM

Justin, well done and passion everlasting... Nice write... Verlena

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/21/2014 1:37:00 PM

We ignite the world with devadtating joy Verlena. So nice to have a great philosophical poet visit my work. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/19/2014 10:47:00 PM

Justin...I just posted two poems and here I come to find that you have posted a new poem as well...What a poem it is! Full of longing and heat...passion and pleasure...A heady mix of need and satiation. Muse and Poet, Minx and Hunk...Slam dunk on a great write. Your muse will be smiling tonight.

Jslambert Mister Roboto
Date: 7/23/2014 12:52:00 PM

oh my lord, It's in your comments and replies too Justin, MAGIC VIAGRA...Im going to freestyle a poem about you man and post it. THaT's Exactly what the hell Im gonna do danG it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/20/2014 12:45:00 PM

I will keep her love alive...content with her knowing my heart is true...I am satisfied as long as I can be proud when I die...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/20/2014 2:04:00 AM

Thank you, Justin. I'm glad you are happy...and content...that's what life is all about. Keep going strong...Keep her happy.

Justin Bordner
Date: 7/20/2014 1:51:00 AM

I feed her fire and she heats my desire, together stoking love higher and higher! Yes Eileen, smiling and shining like the jewel she is, thanks so much! Your Muse has your quill spinning with spirit and passion as well, your productivity is remarkable, and the quality, its Genius! J.A.B.