Justin Bordner Poet Ballad

Mistress Fire

You are beautiful, like fire in the night,
warming me with no boundry
heating me with severity
burning me right,
encircling me with love danger delight,
rattling my manhood's ********
lapping through circulation
engulfing my might,

How could I be in love
with the wind, earth or water
when I have you, my Mistress of Fire,
Enchantress of my blood bud, of my dark dove,
a flamed feathered rub
you lick around my head of history
using red and gold strokes to paint mystery
supernatural seductress of bonfire therapy, I delve,

I stoke you repeatedly with my masculine trunk,
you spray sparks like a star in oval ******,
catching you with my soul's hot prism
we give our lust divine *****,
price for thee, my heart's eternity you've drunk,
You, a woman rediscovering love of song
I, exploring rose ritual in your dawn,
Muse and Poet, minx and hunk  -

J.A.B.

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Eileen Manassian September 5, 2014 at 2:47 AM I'm back to read you, Justin. The imagery here is ablaze with passion. I feal the heat of your heart for your mistress. Amazing write. Justin Bordner September 6, 2014 at 1:42 AM I like it when you come to me in the night Eileen...Her fire is high with me, beyond subduing. J.A.B.

Jay Loveless August 2, 2014 at 10:01 PM Erotic and passionate. As Js said, Magic Viagra haha. Your words hold a magic of seduction. Justin Bordner August 3, 2014 at 2:47 AM Happy that my magic moves into your pulse Jay...J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker August 2, 2014 at 5:08 PM Passionate and in depth... Justin, one of my favorites. You write well. LVerlena Justin Bordner August 3, 2014 at 2:43 AM Thank you Verlena, I compose my love with gratitude and gambit. J.A.B.

Arlene Smith July 31, 2014 at 6:50 AM Wow! This one certainly stirs the emotions of the reader, my friend!.... Beautiful, passion from your pen... Hugs... Arlene Justin Bordner August 1, 2014 at 8:15 PM Emotions can be so physical Arlene, the fire so spiritual. J.A.B.

Carolyn Devonshire July 30, 2014 at 10:55 AM Dear Justin, This poem can be read as love's passion as well as the spark of fire. I had a fireplace at my last house and used to stare at the flames often. There is something mesmerizing about fires. As for the passion, you have a wonderful mistress, my friend. Love, Carolyn Justin Bordner July 30, 2014 at 2:12 PM Fire, a life form that can comfort or kill, bathe or burn, stimulate or singe. I'm happy you like my fire Carolyn. Thanks for visiting. J.A.B.

Paul Callus July 30, 2014 at 3:00 AM Wow Justin! Your mistress of fire is such a fascinating and inspiring fount to your poetic writes. She 'raises' you to heights of delight and satisfaction. You're lucky...and so is she! // paul Justin Bordner July 30, 2014 at 3:10 AM We live to burn Paul! Thanks for the great comment. J.A.B. AF&AM

Poet Destroyer A July 25, 2014 at 5:06 PM Justin, extreme and beautiful. Your poem has color, and heat that burns for some I see. I think your poem has spunk, rhythm and flow. A dark dove, flying high in a world so vivid and free, where else can one find a muse. Every line is an expression, that leads to your one and only muse. Enjoyed, Linda Justin Bordner July 26, 2014 at 2:08 AM How could a Poet like me possibly love and treasure a Woman, and Muse who is anything less than extreme, extreme in her charm and extreme in genius. Thank you for being so beautiful Linda...J.A.B.

Charmaine Chircop July 23, 2014 at 4:32 PM Mistress Fire is the greatest title choice for the passionate flames ignited in each verse..Well done!! Justin Bordner July 23, 2014 at 7:47 PM Fire is so sexy, so very sexy. Mistress Fire is the truest description for the Woman that excites me most. Thank you for the love Charma...J.A.B.

Laura Breidenthal July 23, 2014 at 3:38 AM I am fascinated by the beautiful, raw imagery you invoke in every line. "you lick around my head of history using red and gold strokes to paint mystery supernatural seductress of bonfire therapy, I delve" Love that part- it's so very deep. Excellent piece Justin. Never fail to surprise me with your artful and fire-spurted translucent words. I'll be back to read again. Can't wait for more. : ) Always, Laura Justin Bordner July 23, 2014 at 8:09 PM Laura, you are an extremely sensuous Poetess, I love it when our fires touch...Justin

Anne-Lise Andresen July 22, 2014 at 2:24 PM - A really good and romantic love poem, Justin - How beautiful love can be!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Justin Bordner July 23, 2014 at 2:28 PM A most scintillating symbiosis Anne. Muse and fuel lighting the night of Heaven. J.A.B.

Matthew Anish July 22, 2014 at 9:30 AM Brillant description of a love affair here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Justin Bordner July 23, 2014 at 2:22 PM We shall consume each other in the fury and freedom of creative love Matthew, thank you. J.A.B.

Verlena S. Walker July 20, 2014 at 9:46 PM Justin, well done and passion everlasting... Nice write... Verlena Justin Bordner July 21, 2014 at 1:37 PM We ignite the world with devastating joy Verlena. So nice to have a great philosophical poet visit my work. J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian July 19, 2014 at 10:47 PM Justin...I just posted two poems and here I come to find that you have posted a new poem as well...What a poem it is! Full of longing and heat...passion and pleasure...A heady mix of need and satiation. Muse and Poet, Minx and Hunk...Slam dunk on a great write. Your muse will be smiling tonight. Jslambert Mister Roboto July 23, 2014 at 12:52 PM oh my lord, It's in your comments and replies too Justin, MAGIC VIAGRA...Im going to freestyle a poem about you man and post it. THaT's Exactly what the hell Im gonna do danG it!!!!!!!!!!!!! Justin Bordner July 20, 2014 at 12:45 PM I will keep her love alive...content with her knowing my heart is true...I am satisfied as long as I can be proud when I die...J.A.B. Eileen Manassian July 20, 2014 at 2:04 AM Thank you, Justin. I'm glad you are happy...and content...that's what life is all about. Keep going strong...Keep her happy. Justin Bordner July 20, 2014 at 1:51 AM I feed her fire and she heats my desire, together stoking love higher and higher! Yes Eileen, smiling and shining like the jewel she is, thanks so much! Your Muse has your quill spinning with spirit and passion as well, your productivity is remarkable, and the quality, its Genius! J.A.B.