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Mister P and Mister G

Mister P My puppy One day met One odd pet! With a swell Sticky smell Zigzag wags Tails play tag Yipped, to say "How's your day?" Answered bleat, "It's been neat!" Cocked his head Strangely said! What dog talks Without barks? Short legs pump Bouncy jumps Lots of spots Polka dots Eyes like girls' Blue marbles Chin unsheared Old-man beard Oblong jaws Cloven paws He's no joke Mister Goat! 9/13/20 For 'Threes, Please' contest Sponsor: Beth Evans

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/22/2020 6:42:00 AM

So cute! CONGRATS, Michelle. Janice

Jcb Brul

Date: 9/18/2020 8:50:00 PM

lovely unique write Ms Michelle. I learn from the form I only encounter now. Goodluck for the sure win!!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2020 9:20:00 AM

What a delightful tale told in rhyme, Michelle. Surely this will be a winner. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

John Watt

Date: 9/15/2020 10:59:00 PM

I hope Mister P solved the Mister E of Mister G! I imagine they hit it off just fine. Cute story told in a fun way, hope it's a winner.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/15/2020 3:06:00 PM

Whoa. I'd say this entry is rated 'PG!' Enjoyed, Michelle. Good luck in the contest

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/15/2020 9:20:00 PM

I did not think of that, but it looks like you're right, glad you stopped by~

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/15/2020 9:38:00 AM

Michelle - very clever - poor puppy, - did he suffer from nightmares after. LOL. Although Goats I believe make very faithful pets, like pigs. A wonderful poem my friend and a good laugh. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/15/2020 9:20:00 PM

Goats are so adorable, I wish I could have one (or ten!)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/14/2020 6:15:00 PM

Hello Michelle … seems like a lot of fun watching Mr’s pup and goat in play - thank you Michelle - Lindsay

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/15/2020 9:21:00 PM

Glad you liked it, thank you, Lindsay!

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/14/2020 11:39:00 AM

My mother was forever telling me to mind my Ps and Qs, but your P&G is far more entertaining! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 9/15/2020 9:22:00 PM

P's and Q's makes me think of peas and carrots, for some reason, thanks for commenting, Rico!