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His name was, in fact, March Holman- The man who was last head of the clan! The second husband of Miss Ida Fields; My stepgrandfather sure as redbird trills! Both generations called him by one name, Day is the same from dawn to sunset flame. Grandparents were Mister and Miss to us- Quaint backwoods custom had dictated thus. Mister Holman was completely uneducated, But in rearing a large brood, participated, Although he was a hard drinkin' hellion, And a tough, hard livin' son of a gun! A mighty eagle with a determined red eye, Without him everything would've gone awry. When I was only seven and learning to sew, He taught me a sewing trick I still know. Back then, golden days were so very young, Like the memory of the melody just sung, And he sure must have been a man of flint, To have left upon time this huge footprint!

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Date: 1/5/2020 12:35:00 AM
I agree; a lovely vivid description, I loved the fact he taught you a sewing trick you never forgot, and I think this is a lovely tribute to a hard-working man, I can see why Miss Ida married him . . . : )
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/7/2020 5:58:00 PM
Thanks, Indiana.
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Indiana Shaw
Date: 1/7/2020 12:32:00 AM
Wow, The word I forgot in the last comment there was "endearing", looking forward to reading all about Miss Lillie . . . : )
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/5/2020 12:00:00 PM
Thank you, Indiana, for your very nice comment. Mr. Holman, himself, fathered two children with Miss Ida, and one of them was Charlie, and the other was my Aunt Lillie, whom I've written about in my poem, 'Legends of Lillie.' Miss Ida had five other children besides those two (one of them my mother), and Mr. Holman would tell everyone they were his. Mr. Holman managed to drive a truck and make a living with it. He also helped to lay the huge stones on the shores of Chicago's Lake Michigan. Blessings, Evelyn :)
Date: 12/30/2019 5:53:00 PM
Vividly descriptive and well-written, Evelyn! Janice
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/30/2019 11:02:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice.
Date: 12/29/2019 9:30:00 PM
Wonderful tribute, Evelyn. Never would think of calling this venerable patriarch anything but Mister! Kudos. :) Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/29/2019 11:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Your words warm my heart. Blessings, Evelyn

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