Mister and Miss Right

Mister Right and Miss Right met at church the other day.
However, they didn’t recognize each other.
And, too sadly, they didn’t know what to say.
They awkwardly looked shyly at each other,
Then they went each their own lonely way.

Fantasizing endlessly about Mister Right,
Miss Right pined “What could he ever see in me?”
Also dejectedly sulking about Miss Right,
Mr. Right mused “How could she love someone like me?”
Both thought there’d probably never be a Mister and Missus Right.

Individually, they both came to the same conclusion:
They both needed some drastic self-improvement.
Mister Right studied management skills for a better vocation.
At the same school, Miss Right learned to cook and gained cultural refinement.
As their paths crossed, they’d get into better conversations.

The moral is that it’s more important to be Miss or Mister Right than to just find Mister or Miss right.
Happily, Mister Right eventually lived up to his name
And felt himself worthy of charming Miss Right.
And happily, Miss Right also did and felt just the same,
And she walked down the aisle to become Missus Right.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/12/2014 12:00:00 AM
What a theme! Excellent! :) Wishes!Saba!
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Saba Khan
Date: 5/15/2014 11:41:00 PM
Sure Robert :) Mark..I really appreciate it..very well :)
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Robert Gruhn
Date: 5/13/2014 6:41:00 PM
Yes, this piece is excellent, as are all of your works, this theme really would touch most peoples hearts and dreams! Best regards, Robert Gruhn Mark, I am about to post a poem titled "About Mars And Venus" and would truly appreciate your remarks. I noted that you were born in 1949, I was born in 1950, so we both went through the 50's and 60's! AWESOME!
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 5/12/2014 12:52:00 AM
It was inspired by a sermon I heard for single adults that I heard about 1984/85. It focused on being Mr or Miss Right rather than just searching for that person. It made an impression that I still remember now.
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