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Mistakes - Am I a Fake

What to look for? Where do errors lie? Are they in the eye of the beholder or do they lie? I believe I’m a poet, a prophet of paraphrase, a swindler of alliteration, the rhyme above all reason. I think I know! Am I who I think I am? A big fat ham. My eyes wander - cross-eyed thinkers, blinking s.o.s. How Do I Overcome Success I Mean Mistakes As big as a lobster-steak! Have a stake in me. Teach me your tricks. Throw the stick — I’ll chase it, Bring it back and wag my tail, With openness to learn. Burn my bridges — not! Great Scott, reel me in with a fishing rod — take the hook from my mouth. Throw me back in. O Genie, make me like Aladdin — rich in words, like a Princ(ess). Reveal that I am a fake, so I humbly shake the magic from my frame, and become who I really am. 8/28/2019 Overcoming Mistakes Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 9/12/2019 11:21:00 AM
You are a true poet. Excellent, graceful and poised, a pen in hand, parchment ready, tea, scones, a tree with all afternoon to entertain... Wonderful my friend. Ann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2019 11:44:00 AM
Such a nice comment! Thank you, Ann!
Date: 8/31/2019 9:13:00 AM
I don't know what to say. I think your wording is brilliant.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2019 2:31:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 8/29/2019 12:41:00 PM
"Have a stake in me. Teach me your tricks. Throw the stick — I’ll chase it, Bring it back and wag my tail, With openness to learn." - I felt spent after getting through it. Great job!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 8/28/2019 5:21:00 PM
Intriguing --- would be the understatement of the year here... This is such a fascinating window into the Kim Rodrigues we thought we knew. WOW! ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2019 6:02:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon! :)
Date: 8/28/2019 3:16:00 PM
very introspective and interesting poem, Kim. I like how you were talking to Genie!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2019 6:02:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 8/28/2019 12:00:00 PM
A work of art, Kim....bet you win! Panagiota xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2019 6:02:00 PM
We will see...
Date: 8/28/2019 10:25:00 AM
Very abstract and definitely a creative approach to the contest theme. This was amazing. I loved everything about this.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2019 10:26:00 AM
Thank you so much for your encouragement, my friend!

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