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Mistaken Identity

Down around ankles were his trousers
as he caressed her he said wowzers
finding there no lady
it was all so shady
as he always seemed to pick posers

written 05/22/2014

contest Bawdy, Bawdy Bawdy Miss Clawdy

funny lovegenderlimerick

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

June 17, 2014 at 9:24 AM

Awesome bawdy.. Congrats on your win, Shadow.

Poet Destroyer A

June 14, 2014 at 12:11 AM

Shadow,, :) Congratulations, on your win. "Luv Linda"

Sara Kendrick

June 9, 2014 at 6:07 PM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara

Elaine George

June 9, 2014 at 1:12 PM

Toooooooooooooo funny. Lol. Many congrat's,Shadow. Elaine

Mohan Chutani

June 9, 2014 at 12:38 AM

Nice Limerick, Shadow. Congratulations on the win. Mohan

Richard Lamoureux

June 8, 2014 at 8:33 AM

So pleased to see this gem on the list Shadow.

Skat A

June 8, 2014 at 7:32 AM

Shadow,, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 7, 2014 at 9:50 PM

Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, shadow

Andrea Dietrich

June 7, 2014 at 9:49 PM

Congrats on the win, Shadow. My favorite part was trousers rhymed with wowzers!!!

Sara Kendrick

May 29, 2014 at 5:13 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest...Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..I guess this man was really surprised..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

May 23, 2014 at 8:12 PM

Awesome last line!!

Lucilla Carrillo

May 23, 2014 at 11:19 AM

This is good and you did a great job. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

May 22, 2014 at 11:00 PM

hahaha, you could have made this even bawdier. but this sure gets the message across. Oh, I just saw the last line needs one more syllable. HUrry and change it. Maybe you could say: "oh, why did he always pick posers?" (see the blog that Roy just did about making sure the limericks are right) With that change I think you will be on the winners' list.

Carolyn Devonshire

May 22, 2014 at 4:24 PM

Oooh, what a surprise? Did you see "The Crying Game"? This is just what happened to Steven Rea. You'll definitely win with this one! If I could give it a 10, I would. Love, Carolyn