Blood

blood that’s lukewarm cooling off dreams of romance best stay friends posted on March 18, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2018 2:47:00 PM

It's not good when the feelings are not returned!! I enjoyed this, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/19/2018 9:36:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Silent One

Date: 3/19/2018 7:38:00 AM

oh, such is love... nice haiku Line..

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/19/2018 9:20:00 AM

Thank you for your visit and comment, SO. Much appreciated.

Jean Murray

Date: 3/19/2018 6:40:00 AM

Unrequited lust's a bummer Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/19/2018 9:19:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Jean. Much appreciated.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/18/2018 11:06:00 PM

This is so awesome! A FAVE! :) xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/19/2018 9:17:00 AM

Thank you so much, Maureen. Most appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/18/2018 10:40:00 PM

So many ways to think about this one. Better than 'modern art,' Line! My own first reaction was: The speaker of the last line was 'saying,' Down girl/boy. Down!...

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/19/2018 9:19:00 AM

In any event, it's an awkward situation that's not pretty. Sounds like you've been there once or twice, Gershon.