Mist Song

The waves lick the pier-deck beams,

   a boat has passed upon the lake

   to shuffle the song upon the wind,

   ebbing whooshes.....

The smoky waters still to tease

   slow with ancient whispers,

The Loon leads upon the woody melody,

   some sylvan songster

   too beautiful to languish,

   still sleeping....

Not floating upon the dawn

   through misted peace;

   all ears have heard

   the first kiss of throngs,

Gentle as waves upon the tide,

   from the very earth it seems....

   the sweet haunting cry

   echoes souls through silts

   leagues deep,

The very marrow of stone,

   and pine and leaf,

A morning hushed but for its 

   pretty plea, a male perhaps

   (so tender with feminine appeal)

They all call so, pillowed 

   their first-light throngs,

Angels upon the deep billowed morn,

Where the very clouds above

   have seemed to hover

   above the lake along,

Their soothing cry 

   fills the waking wood....

   hushed waters, still as stars

   feeds the twilight with song

(pining through hovering hats of mist)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Clark Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 7:29 PM
very inviting work - images very sharp! well done!
Lindley Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:10 PM
So glad to have found this lovely piece of art! Soothed my soul and lightened my load a tad too. Brilliant painting my friend, brilliant! Directly into my fav it goes!!
Bordner Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 8:30 PM
You have a great collection of metaphors in the fine write of nature erotica. "Marrow of stone..." very fine art. J.A.B.
A   Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 5:46 PM
Keith, filling the twilight with song. The poem is captivating, and gentle. You are a smooth poet. Thank you so much for understanding the little pain i had to endure here on this very site. I was amazed how you knew exactly what I was talking about. I'm talking about a comment you left on one of my old poems... thank you..HUGS..Linda
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 11:03 AM
Thanks Linda for your kind comments, and I hope I made you feel better(we are never alone!) Go Cowboys!
Callus Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Very well expressed poem, Keith. So many beautiful pictures...full of imagery. An artist at work. rate it highly :) // paul
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 11:06 AM
Kudos Paul, major compliment from such a fine poet as yourself! And an artist who understands 'painting with words' Glad you enjoyed
Ink-U-Script Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 12:49 PM
This has awesome imagery...While reading it took me to the place you were speaking of...You are very talented! !!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 3:07 PM
Thanks Pace, glad you enjoyed; I was hoping for such a response! :-)
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