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Ah, disperse, dissolve, deploy, aqua vitae, all through the depth of primal forest rise, turn the shades of green toward blue-gray. Soften shades of purple shadows, disguise, and bath the chill of night with damp display. Ah yes, rise to treetops and tors, comply, and hide the prey from predators this night, blanket the woods in opalescent white.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/20/2014 10:01:00 PM
so lovely, debs. congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/19/2014 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this Mystical marvel Debbie.
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Date: 11/18/2014 9:31:00 AM
Who would not like this? Congrats Debbie...huggs
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Date: 11/17/2014 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie on topping the podium with this fine write.
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Date: 11/17/2014 10:30:00 AM
As are all your writes this is a magnificent piece. Fav.
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Date: 11/17/2014 1:11:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats Debbie:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2014 8:02:00 PM
I especially love the way you ended this beautiful winning entry Debbie. Big congratulations on your wonderful win! Congratulations on your other wins too!
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Date: 11/16/2014 7:21:00 PM
A superb painting!!!!!I really enjoyed / Congrats.......Tasty!!!Love & Light
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Date: 9/23/2014 2:11:00 PM
really love how you drew this excellent piece
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Date: 9/1/2014 4:08:00 PM
Beautiful, Debs. I love the word opalescent! It's always such a cool word to use in a poem like this one.
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Date: 9/1/2014 8:59:00 AM
I see a spectacular forest scene in these elegant words. Thanks for this serene vision.
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:37:00 PM
your imagery is incredible but most of all it is original. your work is important. i just love reading you and each piece over and over again.
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Date: 8/29/2014 3:11:00 PM
I like the last line of this poem. I remember you saying there are some good people out there - you were right. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/27/2014 2:35:00 AM
I agree with Robert. Sure to top the winner's list, Deb. Lainie
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Date: 8/26/2014 8:41:00 AM
Now, THAT is what I call good rhyme. Good to hear you're writing today. Me? I'm in freak out mode... too much housework. I am NOT a housewife, I'm a mother-educator. Ha! I may throw the dishes off the balcony today, I'm that unglued. @#$%! Miss you. Big time. xoxox
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Date: 8/21/2014 7:05:00 PM
Good job with the form Debbie. By the time I got through I was referring to it as "Ottava screama"
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Date: 8/21/2014 1:56:00 PM
wonderful imagery Debbie I am struggling with this form at the moment but got time yet:-) Good luck with the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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