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Missing You

i walk along the eastern shores stepping in the shadows of past as my footsteps fade beneath yours when scores of memories are cast stepping in the shadows of past to ease the pain of missing you when scores of memories are cast in salted tears and scarlet hue to ease the pain of missing you as my footsteps fade beneath yours in salted tears and scarlet hue i walk along the eastern shores 02/08/2020 Pantoum poetry contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier Theme I Miss You

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/29/2020 12:30:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/10/2020 9:31:00 AM

A beautiful write Sandy longing, love, tears and memories, all the most important ingredients were mixed into this awesome write - hope the footsteps no longer fade but reach you and ease the pain of your heart felt longing. Blessings dear friend, Jennifer.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/10/2020 2:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Jennifer. If there is one thing I can convey through poetry it’s definitely the sadder emotions They just seem to entice my muse. Hugs

Chris Green

Date: 2/10/2020 6:59:00 AM

Beautifully written, the sad ache of the heart is truly felt in this wonderful poem. Best wishes in the contest Sandy

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/10/2020 2:21:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris :) hugs

Ann Foster

Date: 2/9/2020 1:59:00 PM

So sad... but lovely. Well written. Ann

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/9/2020 7:58:00 PM

Thank you so much Ann.... hugs and blessings

Eve Roper

Date: 2/8/2020 6:31:00 PM

Beautifully written, Sandra. But, Line does not specify a Rhyming Pantoum just Pantoum. A plain Pantoum form ; abcd bedf dcfa .. same pattern except the other rhymes. You might want to ask her.. let me know if she does. hugs eve PS good luck in the contest.

Eve Roper
Date: 2/8/2020 10:02:00 PM

yes, traditionally they rhymed, that is why I love the rhyme form

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/8/2020 8:05:00 PM

Thank you Eve...I wrote her to ask her...I had written a couple for you in rhyme and when I looked on the definition on here it said traditionally they rhymed but they don't have to...I decided to go with rhyme...I will let you know what she says when she answers my message... hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/8/2020 3:39:00 PM

You have the emotions flowing through every line, Sandy--my very best for a win.

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/8/2020 4:36:00 PM

Thank you Vijay....I struggle with these forms but like to attempt them when time allows.... hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/8/2020 12:52:00 PM

Find this form so hard, have only written one and the computer nearly went out the window lol. You've composed it well Sandra, good luck. Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 2/8/2020 1:22:00 PM

Thank you Tom...I find the form difficult as well, Eve had written on how to compose them on her page so I wrote two for her contests... decided to try another for Line's though I still struggle with writing them... hugs