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Daddy and mother's graves well-kept.... In my heart, an unbandaged wound reigns.
Written: March 01, 2023 Contest: 'A New Crystalline-Any Theme' Sponsor: Tania Kitchin Checked syllables on How Many Syllables Checked on here Grammar checker

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Date: 3/14/2023 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, with this stirring poem, Sara. :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/14/2023 11:13:00 AM
Thank you for the smile, Evelyn. I appreciate your visit. Sara
Date: 3/14/2023 4:23:00 AM
No ambiguity here Sara, unlike my one! your words are sincere and moving, congratulations on your win, cheers David
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/14/2023 7:27:00 AM
David, I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 3/13/2023 4:03:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your winning placement with your emotive crystalline!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/14/2023 3:07:00 AM
I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Date: 3/13/2023 7:34:00 AM
Stunning write dear Sara. Congratulations! :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/13/2023 12:49:00 PM
I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations, Linda. I am glad you took time to read the two lines. Sara
Date: 3/13/2023 5:49:00 AM
- Two lines with a lot of emotion, Sara :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/13/2023 12:48:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, for dropping by with congratulations. Sara
Date: 3/5/2023 3:53:00 PM
The contrast of the well kept graves and un healed wound is so profound, so sad and moving~
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/6/2023 2:36:00 AM
Thank you, Michelle. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 3/2/2023 5:15:00 AM
Moving! In verse and feelings. Touching. May God esse your lasting grief. Hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/2/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thank you, Sally. It is not as bad as it was at first. It is amazing how we think if only I could ask them something that they would know the answer about family or some of their acquaintances. I appreciate your visit. Sara
Date: 3/2/2023 12:54:00 AM
Lovely contrast.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/2/2023 4:34:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. I always appreciate your visits. Sara
Date: 3/1/2023 6:19:00 PM
Indeed, the memories of our deceased parents will remain as an open wound. All the Best dear Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/2/2023 4:32:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit and all the best. Sara

Book: Shattered Sighs