Sara Kendrick Poet Crystalline

Notes About The Poem

Missing Them

Daddy and mother's graves well-kept....
                              
                                 In my heart, an unbandaged wound reigns.     


Written: March 01, 2023
Contest: 'A New Crystalline-Any Theme'
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Checked syllables on How Many Syllables
Checked on here Grammar checker

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 14, 2023 at 10:13 AM Congratulations on your win, with this stirring poem, Sara. :) Sara Kendrick March 14, 2023 at 11:13 AM Thank you for the smile, Evelyn. I appreciate your visit. Sara

David Kavanagh March 14, 2023 at 4:23 AM No ambiguity here Sara, unlike my one! your words are sincere and moving, congratulations on your win, cheers David Sara Kendrick March 14, 2023 at 7:27 AM David, I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Tania Kitchin March 13, 2023 at 4:03 PM Sara, congratulations on your winning placement with your emotive crystalline! Sara Kendrick March 14, 2023 at 3:07 AM I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler March 13, 2023 at 7:34 AM Stunning write dear Sara. Congratulations! :) Sara Kendrick March 13, 2023 at 12:49 PM I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations, Linda. I am glad you took time to read the two lines. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2023 at 5:49 AM - Two lines with a lot of emotion, Sara :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs Sara Kendrick March 13, 2023 at 12:48 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise, for dropping by with congratulations. Sara

Michelle Faulkner March 5, 2023 at 3:53 PM The contrast of the well kept graves and un healed wound is so profound, so sad and moving~ Sara Kendrick March 6, 2023 at 2:36 AM Thank you, Michelle. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

Sally Eslinger March 2, 2023 at 5:15 AM Moving! In verse and feelings. Touching. May God esse your lasting grief. Hugs Sara Kendrick March 2, 2023 at 7:25 AM Thank you, Sally. It is not as bad as it was at first. It is amazing how we think if only I could ask them something that they would know the answer about family or some of their acquaintances. I appreciate your visit. Sara

Victor Buhagiar March 2, 2023 at 12:54 AM Lovely contrast. Sara Kendrick March 2, 2023 at 4:34 AM Thank you, Victor. I always appreciate your visits. Sara

Valsa George March 1, 2023 at 6:19 PM Indeed, the memories of our deceased parents will remain as an open wound. All the Best dear Sara Sara Kendrick March 2, 2023 at 4:32 AM Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit and all the best. Sara