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Missing the Real... Red, White and Blue

Missing the Real... Red, White and Blue rip yer guts out if yer able put-cher colors on the table red fer war and green fer envy now dance yer jig with righteous gravy you sell yer soul to istanbul with lucre' from yer cock and bull yer eyes they puke-up venomous snakes for feasting nations, raise the stakes! maybe- drop a bomb or two that's how we roll in katmandu our boys you send them to their graves defending what? new amerikan slaves the time will come, you'll see it soon we won't build yer brigadoon so give us back the land we love crush all the cannons, send us doves and we will once more strike-up-the-band sing all the classics....ain't America Grand! ***inspired by PD's jammin' slammin! 07/17/10 5:55pm helpful note: am reacting to a young Man's death in Afghanistan two-days ago, from my town, defending an outpost in Kandihar, he died alongside his two mates....we're all having trouble swallowing it....

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Date: 8/14/2010 4:25:00 AM
A well deserved win, James
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Date: 8/2/2010 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 7/31/2010 11:28:00 AM
It sickens me, that recently the real reason why we are there has been disclosed. For every thousand out there, the Senate and Downing Street has to put an elected Senator or MP to serve in the front lines. They can do their tour of duty somewhere where they do not belong, just like our troops, male or female. Then they can report back the truth. I am so sorry for your communities loss James >> James
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Date: 7/30/2010 3:59:00 PM
a very enriched and as well straight forward,fantastically written with a wonderful flow in the words of your message,,and Thank You for reading and commenting on my words,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 7/27/2010 8:15:00 AM
Jim, your reaction is understandable and lauded by your win in the contest. Congrats! Dan C
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Date: 7/27/2010 7:21:00 AM
Good morning and late congatulations Jimbo!!!, enjoyed your poem it is a terrible fate here in your slam,,, Have a good and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 7/26/2010 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations (James) on your win in (Destroyer((Poet's contest "Slam!!! Slam!!! Slam!!! . Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2010 6:00:00 PM
Congrats Jimbo on your winning poem in P.D.'s contest with this fantastic write... knew i'd be back to congratulate u my friend.. enjoy your spot in the winners circle.. with luv...
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Date: 7/20/2010 7:44:00 PM
WELL DONE JAMES, GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST.-SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:48:00 PM
Jimbo the poem was beautiful but your comments following it made it outstanding. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 7/19/2010 11:30:00 AM
sorry for your loss!! We have lost young me in our town too! One young man wrote a neat article for the local papers here. I wish I had a copy to post...he was for staying over in the war even though he was active duty...he had seen the good the soldiers did over there.
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:59:00 PM
loved it!!...great slam!..
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:26:00 AM
I could have been sent to Afgan in 1983 serving in the Soviet Army. More than 15 000 !!! our (soviet) soldiers fell there. How many worlds ceased to exist! And now - yours. The history doesn't teach anyone, as Russians say. Sarcastically written, sharply. There is nothing for a poet but to slam in this case. Win the contest James!
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Date: 7/17/2010 10:56:00 PM
well, JIMBO, this ROCKS> I think you deserve a GREAT win for this one, sir. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/17/2010 5:29:00 PM
Boy am I on your team! You know I mentioned YOU in my verse on favorite poetry soup pals! (I think colleges & high schools should have a course in how NOT to get drawn into military service!..let the nation accept alternative service!)
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Date: 7/17/2010 4:47:00 PM
Sorry about the loss of the young soldier who was so close to you...It is not fair that we loose our youth to military service in dangerous places with the chance of injury and death..Great one that should do well in the contest..I see winners' circle written on it..Good luck..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 7/17/2010 4:32:00 PM
Thank you James, a wonderful entry,,a good reason to slam,..p.d.
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Date: 7/17/2010 4:14:00 PM
Jimbo.. magnificent is the only way I can describe this one.. good luck in PD's Slam contest.. enjoyed .. with luv..
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