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Missing Love, Missing Her, Missing

Missing love, missing her, missing… Leaves are falling all around Time I was on my way The seasons change and so do I My smile lingering of moments spent while colors dance in abstract fauna clashing with drab thoughts Thanks to you, I'm much obliged Such a pleasant stay If anything, you made it special Greetings of morning drifting on a sunrise of lavender whispers singing sweetly on the breeze But now it's time for me to go The autumn moon lights my way As nighttime glows I must ramble where destinies play and winter is merely a state of mind chilling dreams along the path But now I smell the rain and with a pain And it's headed my way It follows me wherever I go, regrets fall in torrents creating puddles on the edge of my fate, missing love, missing her, missing… Good night Soupers Written with the help of the lyrics of the song “Ramble On” by Led Zeppelin The bold lines are the song lyrics

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Date: 11/20/2018 8:43:00 PM
Winter chilling dreams..regret falling in torrents ... beautiful ... simply awesome
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Chris Green
Date: 11/21/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thank you so very much Debjani. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 11/18/2018 2:44:00 PM
Missing you :)
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Lifes' Tapestry
Date: 11/19/2018 12:18:00 PM
Yes!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/19/2018 7:45:00 AM
Does that mean you liked it? :)
Date: 11/5/2018 10:21:00 PM
This is going in my favourites. Totally agree with Sunlite, great formation to this fabulous write.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/6/2018 7:32:00 AM
Thank you so very much Elizabeth. It is so nice to see you again.
Date: 11/5/2018 6:35:00 PM
Love the way you formatted this. Makes the whole poem more emotional.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/6/2018 7:31:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 11/5/2018 5:27:00 PM
Missing these beautiful thoughts penned in a sentence or two...Missing here...Missing the beauty of poetry and friends.Love this.Goodnight :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/6/2018 7:31:00 AM
Missing you my friend. Thank you for your kind words and for bringing a smile to my page.

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