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Missing In Action

Private O'Toole was only eighteen when he marched off to war. He glanced back to see his tearful Mother standing in the door. Across the way he heard the mournful wail of the midnight train, Waiting to hasten him away from his Hoosier home adding to his pain! He was deep in thought as the train slowly glided from the station, Recalling that his Grandpa and Dad had fought in wars of liberation! He felt a twinge of pride, yet he would miss the love and warmth of home, Tinkering with his '37 Ford and roaming the fields with his dog, Jerome! He leaned over the ship's rail watching San Francisco's lights slowly wane. Like countless heroes before him, he wondered if he'd ever see them again. The sergeant told him he was taking a cruise to Korea to stem the Red Tide, And to just settle back, to always wear his dog tags and enjoy the ride! Private O'Toole was a combat infantryman and was taught to kill. His unit fought courageously on Korea's infamous Pork Chop Hill. Artillery pounded them day and night and he fell with an anguished cry! His remains were never found - they were taken by death's furtive scythe. His dear old Mother opened the Western Union telegram with dread. "We regret to inform you that your son is missing in action!" it read. A Gold Star Flag was displayed by the grieving Mother in her windowpane, Reminding all of the precious gift she gave the nation in a war so insane! Placed No. 4 in Susan Burch's "Missing" Contest - March 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/13/2012 3:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I lost a father during that time - MIA - no remains. Your poem brought back memories. Mike
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Date: 3/13/2012 3:06:00 PM
Such a tragic story, but a great poem. Congrats on your win, Bob! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/13/2012 12:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Bob. I can feel the anguish of the grieving mother who lost his son in the war and yet find solace of her precious gift for freedom. You painted that so well in your poem. Perfect rhyming scheme! Love Dalila
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Date: 3/12/2012 9:10:00 PM
You are in awesome company at the top of the winner's list with this poem, Robert...I can just picture the wailing mother in this scene...emotions stirred for sure! Congrats, friend. Congrats again!!! Gwendolen
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Date: 3/12/2012 4:09:00 PM
You always give us so much to chew on..one always wonders about those soldiers and why after the war each side couldn't do more to get them home? Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/12/2012 1:24:00 PM
Robert Congrats on your win with this fantastic write.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 3/12/2012 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Missing" contest Bob. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:47:00 AM
Bob congrats on your win, written as only you can write 'em Bob, have I been missing your poems or have you been taking a break, if so I hope all is ok..David
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Date: 3/12/2012 8:01:00 AM
congrats Bob on a wonderful win for this splendid write on those missing in action.. deep and profound.. hope u two lovebirds are doing well in all that snow..oh..
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:58:00 AM
congratulations on your win! Enjoyed how you told the story of this young man and his mother through both of their eyes - and what they both gave up for their country. so honorable, yet sad.
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Date: 3/6/2012 11:32:00 AM
See, when I want to read a great historical poem, I just head over to your poetry page, Robert. You satisfy my need to connect with history on a regular basis!...This is a super strong entry for Susan's contest! I love this...best of luck! Gwendolen
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Date: 3/5/2012 2:29:00 PM
I love this sad and moving piece, Bob. Perfect for the contest. Hope you are both well and having a great week
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Date: 3/5/2012 6:52:00 AM
Missing definitely fits the story.. and how many more young men there'll be to loose in these cold wars only God knows.. Heartwrenching poem with so much truth which touches the heart's core-CharmA
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