Missing Fathers

My brother called to run by me
Some thoughts about our dad,
To see if mine would sync with
Certain memories he had.

He focused on a conversation
When, with lots to drink,
Our dad talked war, a topic
From which he’d most often shrink.

My recollection wasn’t clear,
Although it rang a bell
But my bro remembered details
That my father’d rarely tell:

Being trapped inside a foxhole
When a sudden sneak attack
Spared my dad but all his fellow troops
Would not be coming back.

The remainder of today I spent
With spouse and kids and grands
For a Fathers’ Day that every lucky
Parent understands.

But inside my head I thought about
My father and the war
And I wished he had lived long enough
To want to tell me more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 1:03 AM
"I wished he had lived long enough To want to tell me more." - I wonder if he would have ever wanted to tell you more no matter how long he lived. Most soldiers I know do not talk about the war things they have seen, for it is so painful Ilene.
Leffanta Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 11:49 AM
No, fathers want their children to be happy! No one wants to tell their children about their buddy trying to push his intestines back into his stomach!
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