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Missing Fathers

My brother called to run by me Some thoughts about our dad, To see if mine would sync with Certain memories he had. He focused on a conversation When, with lots to drink, Our dad talked war, a topic From which he’d most often shrink. My recollection wasn’t clear, Although it rang a bell But my bro remembered details That my father’d rarely tell: Being trapped inside a foxhole When a sudden sneak attack Spared my dad but all his fellow troops Would not be coming back. The remainder of today I spent With spouse and kids and grands For a Fathers’ Day that every lucky Parent understands. But inside my head I thought about My father and the war And I wished he had lived long enough To want to tell me more.

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Date: 6/24/2021 1:03:00 AM
"I wished he had lived long enough To want to tell me more." - I wonder if he would have ever wanted to tell you more no matter how long he lived. Most soldiers I know do not talk about the war things they have seen, for it is so painful Ilene.
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Date: 6/21/2021 11:49:00 AM
No, fathers want their children to be happy! No one wants to tell their children about their buddy trying to push his intestines back into his stomach!
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