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Missing Christmas

MISSING CHRISTMAS memories i may or may not recall. the year without a tree. how long did our presents wait for our return? kids squeal with happiness, as only memories are left, and a silent river hastens too many days in fast motion. mom and dad must still be parents, sleeves dripping wet, many towns left behind. trees wave from the tops of cars, from storefront windows. pine needles stab at a speeding station wagon, puddles splashing, snow freezing dewy faces. heart wants to stop but heaves heavily. stop motion...dad stares a long time, lingering as if fate has locked down this moment. won’t there be plenty more? but only his mother will bring presents, year after year. perhaps that is why, dad waits until the last minute to put up a tree, then takes it down again, just as fast. 11/28/2017 Childhood Christmas Memories Contest Sponsor - Bic Gi-Sa

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Date: 11/30/2017 9:26:00 AM
Great depiction of Christmas memories Kim...its nice to remember...best of luck my friend...happy holidays...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2017 10:42:00 PM
Thanks WW!
Date: 11/28/2017 9:38:00 PM
Nicely done, Kim. Your poem looks like a Christmas tree with the top chopped off. I'd be tempted to add a little peak...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2017 10:15:00 PM
I thought the same thing :)
Date: 11/28/2017 5:50:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful and heart-wrenching. Your free verse is spare and haunting and absolutely perfect.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2017 7:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Dale! <3
Date: 11/28/2017 4:26:00 PM
Eloquently expressed, your poem recalls some stressful memories--very well written--sure to win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2017 7:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, my friend!
Date: 11/28/2017 4:03:00 PM
Christmas is a time of year that can often bring back sad or unhappy memories. I enjoyed reading your lovely poem, beautifully written as always, god luck in the contest, regards, Kevin x
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2017 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, Kevin!
Date: 11/28/2017 4:00:00 PM
Oh! What a nice craft to behold, Kim. Best wishes in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/28/2017 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, Adeniji!

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