Missed It

sun up at my feet fresh bread, bacon sizzling scent I guess not awake

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Gerald Kithinji

Date: 11/1/2013 4:48:00 PM

Right. Not awake...awakening!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/25/2013 5:34:00 AM

I love it bacon smells so yummy well portrayed Ty for reading mine Shadow x smiles

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/13/2013 3:20:00 PM

congrats on your great win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2013 8:57:00 PM

congrats, sheri, nothing like the smell of bacon in the morning!!

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/5/2013 1:54:00 AM

Congratulations Sheri...Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2013 10:45:00 PM

Hi Sheri, this is me PD... ;-), enjoyed your senryu. Congrats!! In Susan's contest... xox~ Linda

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/4/2013 1:53:00 PM

For me, it's coffee first then sizzling the bacon!! I like this one!!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 6/4/2013 12:53:00 PM

Mmmmm sometimes sleep overcomes delicious awakenings. Congrats on your place. SuZ

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/4/2013 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning place Sheri xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/30/2013 4:32:00 AM

lovely tongue in cheek poem much enjoyed ty Linda