Missed It

sun up at my feet
fresh bread, bacon sizzling scent
I guess not awake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kithinji Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 4:48 PM
Right. Not awake...awakening!
Hamilton Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 5:34 AM
I love it bacon smells so yummy well portrayed Ty for reading mine Shadow x smiles
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 3:20 PM
congrats on your great win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 8:57 PM
congrats, sheri, nothing like the smell of bacon in the morning!!
Roberts Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 1:54 AM
Congratulations Sheri...Seren
A   Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 10:45 PM
Hi Sheri, this is me PD... ;-), enjoyed your senryu. Congrats!! In Susan's contest... xox~ Linda
Richards Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 1:53 PM
For me, it's coffee first then sizzling the bacon!! I like this one!!
Delaney Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 12:53 PM
Mmmmm sometimes sleep overcomes delicious awakenings. Congrats on your place. SuZ
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Sheri xx
Hamilton Avatar
May 30, 2013 at 4:32 AM
lovely tongue in cheek poem much enjoyed ty Linda
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