Miss Weathers and Me

The black clad arm scaled the old concrete wall,
                                 over the top, down the other side
With friends in tow, I stopped to rest,
                      leaning still against the six foot structure
As a boy of eight, I frequented the alleys and
                                    hidden passageways of the city
Just then, spindling fingers struggled to reach, to grasp
They were reaching for me!
Now just inches from my head
Only the gaping mouths of my friends, frozen in terror,
                                          alerted me to the danger
I looked up to see a wrinkled hand 
Just a hand and an arm in a tight black knit sweater
almost touching my hat
Racing hearts fueled a speedy escape
But this was close, way too close

We had been warned about Miss Weathers
Old lady Weathers
Neighborhood lore
She cuts up little boys and puts them in pickle jars
Don’t ever go near, never accept an invitation inside
You’ll never come out
How could I not have realized whose house
                                  that concrete fence belonged to
That mistake was never made again

We didn't tell anyone what had happened that day
but we knew the stories were true
I’ll never forget Miss Weathers
                    and how I almost ended up in her pantry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/27/2018 7:45:00 AM
So glad you survived to tell the tale . . . ; )
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/27/2018 11:50:00 AM
Me too!, Thanks Indiana!
Date: 10/31/2018 3:11:00 PM
Lucky me. I chose to read this on the cusp of Halloween, and it has sent the chills right up my spine. Keep me far away from those pickle jars! :) gw
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/31/2018 8:06:00 PM
It’s all true and I’ll not forget it, if it brought you some enjoyment, than I am happy!!
Date: 10/23/2018 4:06:00 PM
Fabulous story telling Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/23/2018 6:51:00 PM
Thanks Jan xxoo
Date: 10/23/2018 9:27:00 AM
Hey Mickey...me likey...didn't know you were such a great storyteller, my friend...would like to see a Miss Weathers part two...love & light...^WW^
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/23/2018 12:17:00 PM
Thanks WW, so kind of you to say. It really happened that way, I'm so glad you liked it !!!
Date: 10/23/2018 8:07:00 AM
Great story telling Mike..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/23/2018 8:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Silent One !!!!
Date: 10/20/2018 9:28:00 PM
Scary story, Mike.. I love it..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/21/2018 5:37:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve xxoo
Date: 10/20/2018 7:44:00 PM
Climb the wrong fence and you can find yourself in a real pickle! Mean old Miss Weathers needs to be tarred and feathered. Well done, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/20/2018 9:04:00 PM
lol, thanks Lin xxoo
Date: 10/20/2018 4:15:00 PM
In a pickle jar! I loved this Mike. Thank you for putting a smile on my face today!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/20/2018 5:08:00 PM
Thank you Connie, if I put a smile on your face, then I have have done my job!!!! Xxoo
Date: 10/20/2018 1:20:00 PM
That took me back Mike, getting up to all sorts of devilment, enjoyed it. Tom.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/20/2018 2:10:00 PM
I'm so glad you liked it, Thanks Tom !!
Date: 10/20/2018 12:02:00 PM
Ooh, she gave me a chill...eating little boys; what a horror! Good thing you didn't make that mistake again. I think every neighborhood has one of these or at least a haunted house. A great Halloween pen!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/20/2018 2:09:00 PM
Thanks so much M.L. Happy Saturday xxoo
Date: 10/20/2018 11:36:00 AM
Wow! Great writing Mike. :) I can see you writing short stories too.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/20/2018 2:09:00 PM
That's so kind, Thanks Heidi xxoo
Date: 10/20/2018 11:35:00 AM
- To do forbidden things is very exciting for children ... of course the excitement attracted :) - But, forget such a story ... no ... never ! :) - A great story with exciting elements, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/20/2018 2:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 10/20/2018 10:45:00 AM
That was a scary episode..splendid imagination, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/20/2018 10:52:00 AM
Thanks Vijay!!
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