Miss Missing You

Hello i'm missing you,
Dont matter if i've only known you for a few.
This just came out of the blue,
It started out slow,
But soon became an unstopable flow,
I cant stop thinking about how your face glows,
Or how your hair looks when the wind blows.
I think often about the way you eyes held desire,
the way your smile could send me higher and higher.
I still remember every detail of your face,
How you were my perfect brace.
But i sadly recall how you left without a trace,
So thats how i became Miss Missing You,
ALL alone in our favorite place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/11/2014 8:47:00 PM
It can be so hard to forgive Life for keeping two marvelous hearts apart Ettie, what can have worth when Reason betrays emotion, when Wisdom has no mercy, when our eyes refuse to look at our hearts. Strangely, I find a sad comfort in your heart, in your poem Ettie. I respect your honest poetry. J.A.B.
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 7/15/2014 12:01:00 PM
Awe thank you so much Justin you just made my day Justin thank you-Love Ettie
Date: 6/17/2014 10:08:00 PM
I can really relate to your words here. It's always sad to see someone leave when you felt such a strong affection towards them.... A really great write, Ettie! Is this an entry for Dave Wood's lyrics contest? If so, I wish you the best of luck!
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 6/18/2014 9:28:00 AM
thank you for your comment-Love Ettie
Date: 6/8/2014 9:13:00 PM
I'm rating this a 7 out of 7 and favorite poem. Yah deserved it. Simple, but to-the-point and beautiful way of portraying your situation...
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 6/15/2014 11:59:00 AM
Thank you lol:)-Love Ettie
Date: 6/8/2014 9:12:00 PM
I loved this verse from beginning to end. Touching, sad and full of passion-like reminiscences. Wow...was this person someone you loved long ago (as a friend?)? Please soupmail me about what inspired this write! ~keep in touch! Sorry for writing a long comment, but this poem is priceless. -DWB
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 6/15/2014 12:01:00 PM
I totally will!!! Thank you for your comments.......sorry haven't soupmailed you in awhile been so busy!!!-Love Ettie
Date: 6/8/2014 9:08:00 PM
Beautifully written! haha Had to check out your newest compositions. (: This made me smile some! Reminds me of me when someone leaves me without a trace (it has happened here and there before in my life). Sad that that's the truth, but oh well...misfortune will come our way, but this poem is fortunate and golden! Keep writing with your undying might. Take care - thanks for the messages you sent to me. Will reply as soon as possible! -DWB
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