Miss Midas

The bluest of blue in the eyes of my sweet child; the most golden gift - the Midas touch with her life... the sweet tenderness within. Not for the "Blue and Gold" contest. Dedicated to my loving daughter.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2011 7:20:00 AM

Elegant expressions and vivid visuals George.. she must be a lovely creature of a child... the way u describe her here ..luv ..

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/8/2011 1:45:00 PM

Nice way to describe your daughter, George. An impressive tanka.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2011 10:57:00 PM

OH MY GOSH, This is the most unique YET that I have seen. I will be lucky if my stupid macaw gets even an HM! This one's gotta score high!! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/7/2011 6:07:00 PM

beautiful images created for blue and gold, george

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/7/2011 3:50:00 PM

What a sweet tribute to your daughter, George. You are lucky to have been blessed with such a "golden gift." Bet you're a doting dad. Thanks for your comments on The Most Vulnerable, but it didn't place in the contest. Still, it allowed me to write about a congressman who showed he is anything BUT vulnerable and a real hero in my eyes. Love, Carolyn