Miss Midas

The bluest of blue
in the eyes of my sweet child;
the most golden gift -
the Midas touch with her life...
the sweet tenderness within.



Not for the "Blue and Gold" contest.

Dedicated to my loving daughter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 7:20 AM
Elegant expressions and vivid visuals George.. she must be a lovely creature of a child... the way u describe her here ..luv ..
Pettit Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 1:45 PM
Nice way to describe your daughter, George. An impressive tanka.
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 10:57 PM
OH MY GOSH, This is the most unique YET that I have seen. I will be lucky if my stupid macaw gets even an HM! This one's gotta score high!! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 6:07 PM
beautiful images created for blue and gold, george
Devonshire Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 3:50 PM
What a sweet tribute to your daughter, George. You are lucky to have been blessed with such a "golden gift." Bet you're a doting dad. Thanks for your comments on The Most Vulnerable, but it didn't place in the contest. Still, it allowed me to write about a congressman who showed he is anything BUT vulnerable and a real hero in my eyes. Love, Carolyn
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