Miss Christy Sambristy, a Little Tale

Miss Christy Sambristy had way too much hair!
When you visited, hair was on every couch, and chair.
It stretched all the way outside her blue and red door!
If she tried cutting it, the hair just grew
                   more and more!

It was a diddly-dop puzzle; what on earth would she do!
She tried running away but the hair caught in her shoe!
She tried braiding it, but the braid spilled out onto the street.
People  had to jump up and down to avoid stepping on it
                 with their feet.

One day a man, name of Mr. H. Goodman Sinclaire
said “I could make many coats with those reddish locks there”
He was a coatmaker, turned scraps into coats he gave away
to poor children absolutely, completely, in every way
                making their day!

He called his friend, Moquilla R. Gorilla, and told his plan
Can you call somebody to help us, if you please, my man? 
Moquilla thumped his chest 5 times, called gorillas far and near
Miss Christy Sambristy will give us her hair, if we can
                  find a shear.

He read the Gorilla directions book for hair-cutting ways.
It won't be easy to find this, it may take twenty days.
So bring me some shark fins dipped in green ocean foam
He spread it on every hair, ON EVERY LAST HAIR HE PUT 
                  green ocean foam!

Miss Christy Sambristy is one happy girl
Her hair is short enough now to curl
Mr. H. Goodman Sinclaire is happy, too
He decided to take all the poor children
                  to the zoo!

Did I mention it took three hundred and one
fat gorillas to carry Miss Christy's
                  hair home!

March 31, 2023
for "Write A Sweet Fairy Tale for Children with a Happy Ending, etc. contest
by B.J. Legros Kelley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 4:13 PM
This is such a great poem for children, Dear Ann, I loved reading it! All the characters and character-names are hilarious - that’s what children enjoy! Congratulations on your win - you have created a Super Fairy-tale Poem!
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 9:28 PM
Congratulations on your win Ann! Thank you for entering your wonderful poem, and we also enjoyed the nice format! :)
Fowler Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 10:04 AM
This is just such a cute tale Ann! I reread it just for the fun you weaved in. All best for the contest! :)
Peck Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 10:38 AM
Thank you, Linda! I like to write nursery rhymes. Second childhood, it must be. :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 8:53 AM
Ahhh!! A cute contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing this red hair tale and for dropping by my page. Sara
Peck Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 10:36 AM
Thanks, Sara. Yeah, I thought she needed red hair because it's so pretty. :)
Turner Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 8:39 PM
very cute Ann. I can hear little girls giggling already:)
Peck Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 8:34 AM
Thanks, Daniel! I think it shows the level of my mind. :)
Daniel Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 7:23 PM
What a hairy tale! loved it, Ann:)
Peck Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 8:47 AM
Thanks so much, Joanna. I sent you a soup mail.
Poet Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 6:42 PM
A well crafted tale, I enjoyed reading this poem/story from the first to the last verse. Good luck with the contest
Peck Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 8:51 AM
Thank you, Lasaad! I like to write silly tales. :)
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