Premiere Contest WinnerMismatch

Circling thoughts true and imagined
comfortably sitting on the irrational
roping fear around feet and arms
without a spark 
from lukewarm heart
to burn the stubble of lies
that gives body  
to the wolf of inaction
stretching out mouth to a smiling pout
while the heart silently cries
and who will balm or answer its why:
words weren’t sent
tears left unanswered.
Lighter than smoke from a hidden fire
more like fragrance from ingested wine
mismatching the lying of the mouth
rising from a trembling heart
sadness wells up in the vacant eyes
and the tone of voice
that never lies.

First Place: Brian Strand-Any Form-2/8/19
First Place: Bob Carmack-Premiere II Open-2/8/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
June 18, 2020 at 9:24 AM
I can see why this one was a winner. Congrats on your win.;0)
Gauthier Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 9:39 PM
Back with more congrats.
Otieng Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 12:53 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations on your win
Cozart Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 10:37 AM
This is beautiful, Frances. Congrats on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 10:24 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Frances. Bravo.
Pandit Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 3:30 PM
Back with BIG congrats on your TOP win.
Watson Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 1:03 AM
Some incredible images here,Frances and it is so true that the tone of voice like the eyes can often expose one's true feelings. Congratulations on your win.
Carmack Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 12:03 AM
Frances - thank you for supporting my contest. I love your poem.
Pandit Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 10:07 AM
WOW! Very well written, Frances..intense emotions ..saddened.
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