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When I was walking in the zoo, I saw a strange and wondrous sight. You would have found in funny too, Unlikely creatures in a fight. I saw a strange and wondrous sight, A hippo fighting with a cat. Hyenas really laughed at that. You would have found it funny too. The pair were really not well matched. Of course the cat was soon dispatched. Unlikely creatures in a fight. But cats have nine lives as you know And so he still has eight to go

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Date: 9/5/2024 1:36:00 PM
I enjoyed the light mood and smooth flow of this poem, Bryn. Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/4/2024 8:47:00 AM
Omg this is a favorite for me! It's seamless! The flow and wording is seemingly without effortand it's so funny!! I'm super impressed! I have a huge grin on my face! Love love love! Xo
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Date: 9/2/2024 7:59:00 PM
Bryn, CONGRATS on your second-place win in my contest. Your entertaining poem made me smile~~especially the last stanza. Also, you NAILED the meter! Soupmail. Janice
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 9/5/2024 4:19:00 AM
Hi Janice, Thank you for the kind comments. I've updated my status on Soupmail so hopefully I should be able to receive Bryn
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/2/2024 8:07:00 PM
Byrn, I can't send you a Soupmail because there's no Soupmail icon by your name. ?? Janice

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