Misled

Nor thunder in the dark, nor flash, nor fire,
nor other pyrotechnics that, they say,
accompany all such events, nor dire
phantasmagorias, going astray

in the unconsciousness. I’m all alone
down by the river which impassive face
turns gold with dusk. The other side is grown
with willows. A bit cloudy; a quick trace

of water striders, playing tag; a heron,
hiding among the reeds; a leaky boat;
an empty planked footway. But where is Charon?
The obol I have brought for him to float

me far away lies on the riverbed:
the tricky death as usual misled.


05/14/2019
Favourite Poem from May, 2019 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Julia Ward
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July 8, 2019 at 3:30 PM
I have been misled. It happens very easily. Excellent write. I love the style. Ann
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July 8, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Twice) Thanks, Ann.
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June 7, 2019 at 5:38 PM
Hello Kurt Ravidas, yes this a poem of being misled. have a nice evening my friend.
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May 17, 2019 at 8:04 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d. ... and good luck in the contest, Kurt :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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May 17, 2019 at 3:25 PM
Thank you, SS. You're sunshine)
Nicole Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 11:01 PM
But where is Charon? "The operator of the ferry that brings the newly dead over the River Acheron into Hades" Within your words I can see this moment. The graphic used around your thoughts helps create the mood. Congratulations Kurt, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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May 17, 2019 at 3:26 PM
Thank you, Brandy)
Wolf Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 8:44 PM
I guess I had a little premonition about just how good this one is. Hey,moy tovarich: Ya pozdravla'yu teb-ye. Molodets!! ~ Gospodin Volkov
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May 17, 2019 at 3:29 PM
You're definitely a prophet, tavarisch volk. Spasiba)
Ashley Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 6:12 PM
Kurt, I’m so pleased to return with a big congratulations for your wonderful and well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your deep and magnificent sonnet. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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May 17, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Thank you very much, Susan. I'm very glad to hear your beautiful words)
Mcconnell Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 3:26 PM
Nice penning deserving the POTD Kurt, so very well done!
Ravidas Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 5:08 PM
Thanks for your encouraging words, Gordon. And for reading too)
Williams Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 9:51 AM
Congrat on winning the contest. You have written truth and been celebrated. Although I know not all the words, I find I like your turn of phrase.
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May 16, 2019 at 1:05 PM
Thank you, Marilyn. Warm rays of hospitality)
Lawless Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Looked up a few vague words and the references open a deep and wondrous insight and provide magnificent imagery. A fantastic take on the contest themes.
Ravidas Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Thank you very much, John. It's nice to see you here)
Warrior Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 8:00 AM
You put on pyrotechnics with thunder & lightning in this dramatic poetic verse...Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...^WW^
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May 16, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Thank you for your congrats, WW. And for friend too)
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May 16, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Great imagery and so nicely written. Congratulations Kurt, on having this wonderful poem honored POTD. Way to go! Charlie
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May 16, 2019 at 9:35 AM
Thank you very much for you kind words, Charles. I have no idea how comes)
May Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 7:17 AM
Nicely penned...Congrats on POTD..
Ravidas Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 9:32 AM
Thank you, Joseph. Rays of respect)
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May 16, 2019 at 7:10 AM
I love what you've done with this contest prompt. Your rich imagery floats without the photo. The water striders my favourite bit. Congratulations on POTD!
Ravidas Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Thank you very much, Maureen. It's an honor to know you reading me)
Williams Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Kurt. Intriguing write. Good luck in the contest...Maria
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May 16, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Thank you, Maria. Glad to see you here)
Lindley Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 6:34 AM
Wonderfully deep in imagination, shades of mythology, death and inner consciousness. Huge congratulations on a very well deserved POTD award given this fine sonnet, my friend...
Ravidas Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Dear Robert, your wonderful words sound very encouraging. Thank you very much. P.S.: I wonder how POTD works)
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May 16, 2019 at 6:18 AM
A wonderfully written sonnet, Kurt, congrats on POTD, John
Ravidas Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 9:25 AM
Thank you very much, John. I'm very glad you reading me)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 4:38 AM
I am so happy to see this poem being honored with POTD Kurt! Big Congrats! It is very deserving. I bet it does great in the contest too! : ) xxoo
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May 16, 2019 at 5:32 AM
Thank you, Connie. What's POTD? Oh, I got it. One million rays of love)
Wolf Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 6:36 PM
This is really, really expertly done, O Classical Poet. Bravo! I fully expect to see it place at or very near the top. ~ In awe, Gershon (soup mail please)
Ravidas Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 5:30 AM
Thank you very much, Wolf) Checked and replied.
Ashley Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 9:31 PM
The dark beauty of your sonnet is captivating, Kurt. Your deep and wondrous imagery is exquisitely expressed. Loved it and a fav! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
Ravidas Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 5:07 PM
Thank you, Susan. Rays of love)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 9:14 PM
A magnificent sonnet Kurt, with the foreign flavors of the world! I hope this is a top winner! I adored it! : ) xxoo
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May 15, 2019 at 5:06 PM
Thank you very much, Connie. Hoping you win)
Lindley Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 11:50 AM
A great picture to go with a superbly crafted sonnet my friend! Every verse a gem too.. A fav.. a true beauty...
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May 14, 2019 at 11:57 AM
Dear Robert, I'm going to hold this comment under my tongue when death comes for me. This is my obol to float away) Thank you very much.
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