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Misleading Beauty

Latching deceased life Mineral depredation Mosses vital spark Nathan Bane Leccese © All Rights Reserved 05/24/2009

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Date: 5/27/2009 10:33:00 AM
Interesting write here, Nathan. Have you entered this in Raul Moreno's contest? I have one similar to this called "Death Valley". Glad you're here at the Soup !!
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:01:00 PM
Excellent Haiku friend. Very well done. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/26/2009 1:44:00 PM
Nathan, another excellent Haiku, James
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Date: 5/26/2009 11:48:00 AM
Good work on this haiku Nathan..keep on doing your thing brother.
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Date: 5/26/2009 11:24:00 AM
I agree this was an outstanding Haiku and thank you for running this contest it was actually my favorite one so far - God Bless you, MJ
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Date: 5/26/2009 10:27:00 AM
Outstanding.
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Date: 5/26/2009 10:12:00 AM
NICE WRITE YOU DID IT AS USUAL NATE GREAT JOB AGAIN
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Date: 5/26/2009 9:45:00 AM
Nicely penned Nate, perfect and concise...Raul
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Date: 5/26/2009 9:45:00 AM
Our haiku prince scores again! Vivid image of this "Misleading Beauty." (Great title, too, Nate!) Love, Carolyn
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