Misleading Beauty

Latching deceased life
Mineral depredation
Mosses vital spark

Nathan Bane Leccese
© All Rights Reserved 05/24/2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mason Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 10:33 AM
Interesting write here, Nathan. Have you entered this in Raul Moreno's contest? I have one similar to this called "Death Valley". Glad you're here at the Soup !!
Townsend Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 8:01 PM
Excellent Haiku friend. Very well done. Smiles from Lolita
Fraser Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 1:44 PM
Nathan, another excellent Haiku, James
Higgins Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 11:48 AM
Good work on this haiku Nathan..keep on doing your thing brother.
Jordan Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 11:24 AM
I agree this was an outstanding Haiku and thank you for running this contest it was actually my favorite one so far - God Bless you, MJ
Al-Riyami Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 10:27 AM
Outstanding.
Megens Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 10:12 AM
NICE WRITE YOU DID IT AS USUAL NATE GREAT JOB AGAIN
Moreno Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 9:45 AM
Nicely penned Nate, perfect and concise...Raul
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 9:45 AM
Our haiku prince scores again! Vivid image of this "Misleading Beauty." (Great title, too, Nate!) Love, Carolyn
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