Mislead

swaying hips as she crosses the floor gawking eyes follow her, begging for more every step, he laps up followed her like a pup until she entered the men’s toilet door…

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Joy Wellington

Date: 10/27/2010 7:04:00 PM

Hey Wilma!!! Why are you watching me!! You see it happened to me the other day. I was at work and working at the Full Body Scanner...well not a lot of officers has that training so I wanted to go to the washroom and no one to cover me, so I close the machine and ran to the washroom, it was only as I reached inside and hold up my head that I realized A guy was infront of me just about to take a pee, LOL, I ran out like the devil was after me. Thanks for your congrats. Luv, Joy (Jew)

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 10/27/2010 12:27:00 AM

thnx 4 congratulatory msg on my win in contest "Blessings make me smile"..............Luv/bestwishes.....Hitendra Mehta

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/24/2010 5:54:00 PM

hahaha!very funny!hehe!loved it..tmfs!

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 10/24/2010 5:08:00 PM

Hey I'm the funny one. hahaha Wilma this is a cracker. I wet me self. I'll send you the bill for dry cleaning Have a wonderful Monday

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/24/2010 4:52:00 PM

Got a chuckle here..Reads like a winner if it was written for one of the contest...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2010 3:09:00 PM

hahahaha. GREAT one .reminds me of my poem on "Lola!" Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/24/2010 1:53:00 PM

This really cracked me up, Wilma! As a reporter, I once accidentally followed former FL governor Bob Graham into a men's restroom. I had a tape recdorder running and just continued to intervfiew him without watching where we were going. His staff had a good laugh! So did Graham. He had a great sense of humor and was the best governor Florida had in recent memory. You did a fine job bringing this event to life! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/24/2010 1:02:00 PM

Wonderful hilarious and humorous write..hahah until she entered the men's toilet door..very much enjoyed the write. It gos to my favourite

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2010 1:02:00 PM

OH WOW.. shocker luv.. a great Limerick today Wilma from your crafty pen luv.. awesome theme too.. enjoyed your creativity as always.. are u the Mysterious Lady ??? please tell .. as the writes with Michael, my White Knight are phenomenal..luv..

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/24/2010 12:30:00 PM

Hahahaha! Yes, it is getting more and more difficult to tell who or what is what, Wilma!! Great job with this hilarious Limerick!! Missed you these past couple of days, girl. I know your weekend's over so have a great week!Love, Audrey