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Miserable Landscape

Miserable Landscape The scene I knew as child was undulating flat and the ocean of straw that mirrored the sky, light and dark, punctuated by islets of farms peopled by folks who lived a life of conformity when not driving to a town that sold booze and gets sinfully drunk scaring wife and animals, and skulking morosely in the barn was looking for a bottle that is not empty. The bottomless pain of silence and the message that so and so had hung himself in the rafter and Thinking if I have to endure another winter… The wind always blew clouds hurried across the sky nothing here, but the endless sulk off the hapless

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Date: 3/30/2017 7:52:00 AM
You masterfully set a mood and painted a scene that could come right out of a novel. You reminded me of one of my favorite writers: Roberto Bolaño:) A 7 Amitiés
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 3/31/2017 4:33:00 AM
thank you, Anne Marie coreeggia

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