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Miserable

Uncountable times, Strongly blocking SHE from roaming out of the righteous pathway. Uncountable times, SHE slip out of the compound SHE set up. My dear, How many attempts more do you want? Do You know,the fruit doesnt taste nice. Please ,go back. Please,restrain. Life,Miserable.Plant a good seed in your dubbing organ and water it. And Then,life shall lift up your lips.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/3/2024 6:07:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/26/2016 6:14:00 PM

Rosey Chariot, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/4/2016 2:30:00 PM

HOPE TO SEE YOU BACK THIS YEAR 2016

Skat A

Date: 11/19/2013 11:07:00 PM

Rosey, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/17/2013 1:10:00 PM

Rosey, , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Rosey Chariot
Date: 11/17/2013 9:29:00 PM

Alright :D Thanks alot .Nice to meet you .

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2013 12:05:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Rosey! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Rosey Chariot
Date: 11/17/2013 9:30:00 PM

Thanks alot for the informations ^^ .Nice to meet you .