Mise-En-Scene

It was a far cry for us to purchase a house That too in the city like Atlanta But desire prevailed upon limited income The House-warming ceremony was on A few relatives had come from nearby area In response to our invitation. My wife was showing the house To a beautiful woman, one of our relative And I was preoccupied with my work Sitting in our loosely fenced enclosure. “This is our kitchen,” my wife said “Voguish” the woman said “This is our bedroom”, my wife said “Very cute” she said using another adjective “This is our living room,” my wife said “Oh, wonderful” Yet another adjective As they came out where I was sitting. “My husband” my wife said “Very cu.cu.cu..” she said, I came to her help, “ I am cu..cutting this…” The woman knew, I taught English in a University I think she wanted me to overheard The random adjectives, she used in English. Don’t ask me in which humour My wife had been as the lady left. While others going for the dinner “Oh, only three bed-rooms” “Kitchen is too small” “How that rotund lady would manage?” We harbored all the remarks Till they faded away with the dinner.
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Date 1-31-14 Form: Free Verse Dr. Ram Mehta First Place Win Contest: Relatives by Judy Konos
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Deschler Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 5:44 PM
This sounds like the family reunion that we have every year! Yet, they are our relatives, and we still love them, no matter what! I enjoyed this humorous poem, Dr. Ram, it is so true to life! :) Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poems.
Maverick Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 12:54 AM
Oh well at least the adjectives have a purpose Dr Ram..' L O L so true to life and its' values'
Johnson Avatar
February 8, 2014 at 11:14 AM
It takes all kinds of relatives, Dr. Congratulations on the new home and the win. Love, joyce
Kayode Avatar
February 7, 2014 at 12:10 AM
Congrats Dr. for your winning with this great work.
Kayode Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 8:29 PM
A funny one Dr. , good luck in the contest. Kayod5.
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