Joyce Johnson Poet Alliteration

Miscommunication

Gabby Gertie garbles news.
Lusty Lester likes his booze.
Twixt the two, tall tales are told.
Seven salacious stories sold.
Tearful Tillie hides her face.
Loathsome lies lead to disgrace.


one of several no. 1s

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Dr.Ram Mehta September 13, 2011 at 9:07 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Joyce

Nette Onclaud September 12, 2011 at 11:25 PM terrific, joyce...loads of smiling cheers to you for the top ,amazing award!! :) huggs

Robert A. Dufresne September 12, 2011 at 8:52 PM Congratulations to you. Awesome win Joyce. great job of it

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 12, 2011 at 6:02 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!!!!!------Lori

Sara Kendrick September 12, 2011 at 3:10 PM Congrats on your great win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi September 12, 2011 at 12:26 PM wow definitely a tongue twister LOL you go gal! Congrad's light & love

Kim Merryman September 12, 2011 at 12:06 PM Congrats on your 1st place win, Joyce! Great alliteration. Kim

Carrie Richards September 12, 2011 at 10:08 AM Clever and funny poem, Joyce! Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 8:25 AM Congratulations on your top win In Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

John Freeman September 12, 2011 at 6:12 AM I think I know of this incident Joyce, a nice Alliteration, you've gendered from it. Congratulations on yur worthy first place, Agape, Moses

David Williams September 12, 2011 at 3:49 AM hey Joyce congrats on your win, sounds like a fun gang to be with..David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 12, 2011 at 1:00 AM Congrats Joyce on first place win with this great Alliteration poetry my friend...luv..

Caryl Ramsdale September 12, 2011 at 12:22 AM A 1st place congratulations Joyce for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR

Gwendolen Song September 8, 2011 at 8:23 AM Good morning, Joyce...lots of energy in this fun alliteration. A lot of fun miscommunicating characters. Good luck. Gwendolen

Caryl Ramsdale September 7, 2011 at 7:26 PM Fun...reads like a winner! Good luck in the "Alliteration Poems Please" poetry contest as John judges my friend. Cr