Mischief


The Sonnet is my favored form;
     with meter, rhyme, and feet, I do conform.
But what if I diverted, mixed
     two meters with a couplet rhyme, affixed
with syllables of eight and ten
     and feet of four and five, and then again,
repeat throughout the fourteen lines...
     play silly mischief with old form's confines?

It seems to me this form is neat;
     I like the freedom using mixed-up feet
and syllables that make lines long
     or short to break up patterns of singsong.

This newest form, I now proclaim,
     that 'Mixed-Feet-Couplet Sonnet' be its name!


Sandra M. Haight

~3rd Place~
Contest: A Form Of Mischief
Sponsor: Nina Parmenter
Judged: 10/04/2018
    
Rules: Creatively modify a standard poetry form 
  
New Sonnet:
  Couplet Rhymes
  Seven 8-syllable lines of four feet (Tetrameter)
  Seven 10-syllable lines of five feet (Pentameter)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Sich aclever sonnet sandra, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, for your congrats and very uplifting comment! Hugs, Sandra
Rose  Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 5:27 AM
I'm smiling. How ingenious of you to mix it up in such a way that it takes on a life of its own. If a sonnet had feet it would look like this, Congratulations on your winning poetry. Have a wonderful day dear Sandra.
Haight Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 6:51 PM
Thank you, Pixie Dust, for your visit and very kind and supportive comments, Pixie! Most appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 12:38 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win. Nice sonnet form.
Haight Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Thank you so much, Sibimal! Hugs, Sandra
Cunningham Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 12:19 AM
You have taken the sonnet as we it , taken it apart and rebuilt it. Congratulations Sandra. Tom.
Haight Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 6:52 PM
Thank you, Tom! Glad you like my new sonnet! It was fun to work out! Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 5:15 PM
Delightful, clever, and playful, Sandra. CONGRATS! Janice
Haight Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Thank you very much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 8:02 PM
A fun poem, Sandra. Well done.
Haight Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thank you so much, Line! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 1:02 PM
My goodness this is clever and creative Sandra! I am sure it will be a top winner! : )
Haight Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 7:01 PM
Thank you, Connie. I had fun with it! Maybe I'll use it sometime for another poem!! Hugs, Sandra :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 11:48 AM
Well written Sandra, this contest is providing many new forms lol. Good luck. Tom
Haight Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 7:00 PM
Thank you, Tom, for your visit and supportive comments! Sandra
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