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Mischief

The Sonnet is my favored form; with meter, rhyme, and feet, I do conform. But what if I diverted, mixed two meters with a couplet rhyme, affixed with syllables of eight and ten and feet of four and five, and then again, repeat throughout the fourteen lines... play silly mischief with old form's confines? It seems to me this form is neat; I like the freedom using mixed-up feet and syllables that make lines long or short to break up patterns of singsong. This newest form, I now proclaim, that 'Mixed-Feet-Couplet Sonnet' be its name! Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest: A Form Of Mischief Sponsor: Nina Parmenter Judged: 10/04/2018 Rules: Creatively modify a standard poetry form New Sonnet: Couplet Rhymes Seven 8-syllable lines of four feet (Tetrameter) Seven 10-syllable lines of five feet (Pentameter)

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Date: 11/9/2018 4:46:00 PM
Sich aclever sonnet sandra, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/18/2018 6:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan, for your congrats and very uplifting comment! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/5/2018 5:27:00 AM
I'm smiling. How ingenious of you to mix it up in such a way that it takes on a life of its own. If a sonnet had feet it would look like this, Congratulations on your winning poetry. Have a wonderful day dear Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/18/2018 6:51:00 PM
Thank you, Pixie Dust, for your visit and very kind and supportive comments, Pixie! Most appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/5/2018 12:38:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win. Nice sonnet form.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/18/2018 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sibimal! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/5/2018 12:19:00 AM
You have taken the sonnet as we it , taken it apart and rebuilt it. Congratulations Sandra. Tom.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/18/2018 6:52:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! Glad you like my new sonnet! It was fun to work out! Sandra
Date: 10/4/2018 5:15:00 PM
Delightful, clever, and playful, Sandra. CONGRATS! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/4/2018 7:34:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/9/2018 8:02:00 PM
A fun poem, Sandra. Well done.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/11/2018 7:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/9/2018 1:02:00 PM
My goodness this is clever and creative Sandra! I am sure it will be a top winner! : )
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/11/2018 7:01:00 PM
Thank you, Connie. I had fun with it! Maybe I'll use it sometime for another poem!! Hugs, Sandra :)
Date: 9/9/2018 11:48:00 AM
Well written Sandra, this contest is providing many new forms lol. Good luck. Tom
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/11/2018 7:00:00 PM
Thank you, Tom, for your visit and supportive comments! Sandra

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