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Mischief

Though sonnets are always dear to my heart I'd rather write them, then right them right You won't find a syllable count here in sight but a foible or two, well that I can do; If perfection you seek, find it you shan't cuz this mischievous poem is deviant and free tethered together for thee; disassembled it's puzzling, even for me ; Some like it cold some like it hot this poem is loose as a chord with no knot Go find me a poet who does it just right while searching for letters to write I think not..... I do hope you are clever like Johnny McDever or I will keep writing like this, forever and ever ! September 5, 2018 .

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Date: 11/29/2018 3:57:00 AM
What else should we expect from a Pixie but mischief. Delightful sonnet. Don't overindulge over Christmas or we might have to wait a while for an on-core. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 11/9/2018 4:53:00 PM
Love your mischievous sonnet lol i struggle with the form and iambic pentameter is all greek to me lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2018 5:08:00 PM
Its important to write in whichever form frees our soul Jan. If it isn't sonnets then write what your heart tells you too. Enjoy the weekend, Thanks for the drop in
Date: 10/4/2018 7:17:00 PM
A great 'mischievous' Sonnet, Pixie! Very clever and congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/4/2018 5:28:00 PM
Very clever. CONGRATS, Pixie Dust! Janice
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Date: 9/8/2018 9:39:00 AM
You have managed to capture the beauty of a sonnet and reshape it through self expression, weaving your thoughts into a poem that is easy to relate to and a delight to read. Emile.
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Date: 9/5/2018 1:07:00 PM
A fun read..enjoyed reading this invention of yours..your own sonnet form..hope you win BIG, Pixie.
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