Linda Alice Fowler Poet Verse

Mirrored Dreams

She dances she glances
Beyond her shoulder
She peers
Looking back
Her beautiful smile
She poses in the mirror
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He stances he chances
Hoping she’s bolder
He cheers
Bold attack
His heart to beguile
He beckons her come nearer

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Paula Goldsmith July 14, 2023 at 8:34 AM Congratulation on your win. A creative dance write. Have a blessed weekend writing away............. Linda Alice Fowler July 23, 2023 at 1:05 PM Thank you dear Paula! hugs :)

Bill Baker June 24, 2023 at 4:04 PM Very intriguing poetry, Linda. A mirror came encourage many thoughts of one's wishes coming true. I like the dance between the two verses. Good luck in the contest my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill Linda Alice Fowler June 25, 2023 at 6:01 AM Many thanks my friend. Excessive hear here, as you know. ;) I am pleased by your visit and comments Bill. :)

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2023 at 1:16 PM nicely done, and good luck in the contest, Linda Linda Alice Fowler June 20, 2023 at 1:23 PM Hi Andrea. Thanks for the read and comment. :)

Richard Evans June 18, 2023 at 5:20 AM This is so aesthetic. The emotional transfer to the reader is seamless. Thanks for sharing.............peace! Linda Alice Fowler June 18, 2023 at 8:07 AM Hey Ricky. Good to see you. Thank you for sharing your kind words in a comment! and Thank you for visiting! Peace begins with a smile :)

Sotto Poet June 17, 2023 at 8:00 PM I enjoyed how you processed the prompt, Linda. The key to happy affection is found in your own reflection! Good luck with the contest Linda Alice Fowler June 18, 2023 at 8:05 AM Thank you Las. I always appreciate your insightful comments. :)

Vijay Pandit June 17, 2023 at 12:17 PM I like your take on the prompt, Linda. Romance is in the mirror! Linda Alice Fowler June 17, 2023 at 1:32 PM And my stanza mirrors his stanza (I hope LOL). Thank you for the kind comment Vijay! :)

Sand Blown June 17, 2023 at 9:11 AM ...'mirror-red dreams.....sounds like a sun down.....stan : ) Linda Alice Fowler June 17, 2023 at 10:13 AM i Stan. Haven't seen you in a while, but then, I've been offline a bit. Yes, a sun down, show down, mow down. Thanks for coming by :)