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Mirrored Dreams

She dances she glances Beyond her shoulder She peers Looking back Her beautiful smile She poses in the mirror - - - - - - - - - - He stances he chances Hoping she’s bolder He cheers Bold attack His heart to beguile He beckons her come nearer

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/14/2023 8:34:00 AM

Congratulation on your win. A creative dance write. Have a blessed weekend writing away.............

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/23/2023 1:05:00 PM

Thank you dear Paula! hugs :)

Bill Baker

Date: 6/24/2023 4:04:00 PM

Very intriguing poetry, Linda. A mirror came encourage many thoughts of one's wishes coming true. I like the dance between the two verses. Good luck in the contest my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/25/2023 6:01:00 AM

Many thanks my friend. Excessive hear here, as you know. ;) I am pleased by your visit and comments Bill. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2023 1:16:00 PM

nicely done, and good luck in the contest, Linda

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/20/2023 1:23:00 PM

Hi Andrea. Thanks for the read and comment. :)

Ricky Muse

Date: 6/18/2023 5:20:00 AM

This is so aesthetic. The emotional transfer to the reader is seamless. Thanks for sharing.............peace!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/18/2023 8:07:00 AM

Hey Ricky. Good to see you. Thank you for sharing your kind words in a comment! and Thank you for visiting! Peace begins with a smile :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/17/2023 8:00:00 PM

I enjoyed how you processed the prompt, Linda. The key to happy affection is found in your own reflection! Good luck with the contest

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/18/2023 8:05:00 AM

Thank you Las. I always appreciate your insightful comments. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/17/2023 12:17:00 PM

I like your take on the prompt, Linda. Romance is in the mirror!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/17/2023 1:32:00 PM

And my stanza mirrors his stanza (I hope LOL). Thank you for the kind comment Vijay! :)

Sand Blown

Date: 6/17/2023 9:11:00 AM

...'mirror-red dreams.....sounds like a sun down.....stan : )

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/17/2023 10:13:00 AM

i Stan. Haven't seen you in a while, but then, I've been offline a bit. Yes, a sun down, show down, mow down. Thanks for coming by :)