Mirrored Dreams

She dances she glances
Beyond her shoulder
She peers
Looking back
Her beautiful smile
She poses in the mirror
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He stances he chances
Hoping she’s bolder
He cheers
Bold attack
His heart to beguile
He beckons her come nearer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 7/14/2023 8:34:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. A creative dance write. Have a blessed weekend writing away.............
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/23/2023 1:05:00 PM
Thank you dear Paula! hugs :)
Date: 6/24/2023 4:04:00 PM
Very intriguing poetry, Linda. A mirror came encourage many thoughts of one's wishes coming true. I like the dance between the two verses. Good luck in the contest my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/25/2023 6:01:00 AM
Many thanks my friend. Excessive hear here, as you know. ;) I am pleased by your visit and comments Bill. :)
Date: 6/20/2023 1:16:00 PM
nicely done, and good luck in the contest, Linda
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/20/2023 1:23:00 PM
Hi Andrea. Thanks for the read and comment. :)
Date: 6/18/2023 5:20:00 AM
This is so aesthetic. The emotional transfer to the reader is seamless. Thanks for sharing.............peace!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/18/2023 8:07:00 AM
Hey Ricky. Good to see you. Thank you for sharing your kind words in a comment! and Thank you for visiting! Peace begins with a smile :)
Date: 6/17/2023 8:00:00 PM
I enjoyed how you processed the prompt, Linda. The key to happy affection is found in your own reflection! Good luck with the contest
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/18/2023 8:05:00 AM
Thank you Las. I always appreciate your insightful comments. :)
Date: 6/17/2023 12:17:00 PM
I like your take on the prompt, Linda. Romance is in the mirror!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/17/2023 1:32:00 PM
And my stanza mirrors his stanza (I hope LOL). Thank you for the kind comment Vijay! :)
Date: 6/17/2023 9:11:00 AM
...'mirror-red dreams.....sounds like a sun down.....stan : )
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 6/17/2023 10:13:00 AM
i Stan. Haven't seen you in a while, but then, I've been offline a bit. Yes, a sun down, show down, mow down. Thanks for coming by :)
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