Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes:  An introspective free verse piece here on the "Mirror of the Soul."  I meant this as a cause for a pause to ponder one's self.  (Gary Bateman, September 28, 2014) 

Mirror of the Soul

Gazing into a clear lake pool . . . 
I saw a reflection of my life before me.

The gaze and what I saw depicted . . . 
A progression of past life experiences.

I savored the funny and kind moments . . .
Looked despairingly on the difficult moments.

This gaze into the mirror of my soul . . .
Astounds and confounds me still today.

And the knowledge that we are all . . .
Much more than the sum of our parts,
Means so much more to me today.

What I’ve learned are six things . . .
Ignorance begets Stupidity,
Knowledge begets Wisdom,
Inspiration begets Creativity,
Light begets Illumination,
Passion begets Vivacity,
Love begets Happiness (but not all the time). 

To know yourself . . .
You must see and sense yourself
In the mirror of your own soul.

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved, Schoeningen, Germany
(September 28, 2014) (Free Verse poetic format)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 6:34 PM
Well done Gary you sir, my dear friend have a God given talent with your amazing pen. Enjoyed your piece! Keep your ink running black and wet! lol... :) Love and Hugs! .xxx D.
Bateman Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 3:32 PM
"D" my ink well will certainly keep running both black and wet. Have no doubts about that. Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and observations. I really appreciate them. You take the time to always to comment meaningfully -- as I try to do. I'm glad you liked "Mirror of the Soul." More poems on the way. I will be by to check out your latest too!! Best Always, Gary XOXO
Sheaffer Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 3:26 AM
There is so much truth in this. It is beautiful and helpful. Thank you, Gary.
Bateman Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Elisabeth . . . Thanks for your visit and read here. I am very pleased that you enjoyed this piece. Continued Best Wishes, Gary
Trifiatis Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Mein freund, Gary, this is a very philosophical approach of the Pythagorean and Platonic approach! The conception and development is beautiful! Excellent work! Ich gratuliere dich!
Bateman Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 2:31 PM
Demetrios Mein Freund!! I really appreciate your philosophical linkage here to the Pythagorean and Platonic approach. I am very pleased that you liked the work. Ich bedanke mich auch!! Alles Gute!! Cheers, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 5:31 AM
such a very deep beautifully penned piece dear friend
Bateman Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 2:25 PM
Liam my friend . . . as you can see, I one of those "inner self persons." Glad you enjoyed the write and thoughts. All the Best, Gary
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Lovely allegorical write well penned, Gary
Bateman Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 5:39 PM
Dr. Ram ... Thank you so very much for your comment here. Glad you liked it!! Best Wishes, Gary
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