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Mirror Mirror

I look in your eyes 
what do I see
A shell of myself
who I used to be
   A minuscule fragment 
of who I was before
When red carpet 
stretched out across my floor
   A day and time 
opportunities, abundant
Long before I became 
hopelessly redundant

   I see an array of patches 
from my many mistakes
My eyes tell a story 
of painful heartaches
   A veil across my skin 
of wrinkles and cellulite 
Shards from the past 
when my future was bright

   Bags under my eyes 
from restless nights
Not dead, but a disgrace
 I've become a blight
   My once white teeth 
Now a yellowish tint
Thanks to years of smoking 
to relax and vent

   I despise you 
for what you reveal to me
You show me ugly 
and how it feels to be
   Unheeding of the causes 
for my bruises and scars
You show only the top layer 
worn and charred

   You are so vain 
with your spotless surface
Come to think of it 
you really serve no purpose
   You make people conceited
More often, depressed
It doesn't effect you at all 
you feel no distress

   You hold your head high
As if your invincible 
No one dare break you
Superstition or principal
   But I can see through
As clear as glass
You have no soul
Just useless mass

   You're a thief of identities
Because you haven't, your own
No personality to claim
An ever changing clone
   Not a person or a place
Just a thing
With nothing to give
Nothing to bring

   There will come a day
You will shatter to pieces
Your frame will fall apart
At the perfectly painted creases
    There will be no memorial
They will trash your remains
No one will miss you
A thing without a name

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/1/2023 8:34:00 PM
Holy crap! I read this at least seven times wow! I felt sadness justification agreement disdain all over an inanimate object! Absolutely putting this one in the favorites well done. You and I ever get the opportunity I'm buying you a coffee and we're going to have one hell of a chat! In complete and utter awe of you! A.S.
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Date: 5/30/2015 11:59:00 AM
The foundation of who we are and how we think is explored within this piece. The surface of life's mirror is scratched and the results is a reflection of disillusionment. Emile. #7
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Date: 5/28/2015 9:26:00 AM
Amazing write, Anna! Mirrors only show our shell which is skin deep...not the heart and soul, the beauty within. Love your poem! Sandra
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Date: 5/27/2015 5:04:00 PM
This is really awesome! My favorite part is the 2d to last stanza...that's genius. Easy 7. *FWIW, I think in stanza 5 you want the word conceited, in place of conceded. ;)
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Date: 5/27/2015 3:05:00 PM
take a second look in the mirror as you are beautiful
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