Mirror Insanity

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MIRROR INSANITY ready aim fire at your eye now don’t miss magnify small dirt speck repeat repeat repeat until your tongue falls from your cheek wipe away hearts they’re too red soak your face in epsom salts don’t breathe in arousing fumes you might wake up 3/6/2017

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Doug Vinson

Date: 3/15/2017 12:42:00 AM

I read this over and over, Kim, and I still don't know. Like it a lot, though. : ) I'm torn between thinking we spend too much time in front of the mirror, or not enough.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/15/2017 12:41:00 AM

Excellent and creative, Kim...congrats on your win!

Frederic Parker

Date: 3/12/2017 6:13:00 PM

congratulation Kim on your win

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2017 6:20:00 PM

Thank you, Frederic!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/12/2017 3:39:00 PM

an intriguing piece here, very modernistic, clever and current, the sort of thing editors are on the lookout for, it captured my attention from first reading - congrats on your win in my contest!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/12/2017 4:59:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charlotte!!