Mirror Image Imagined

My face is not good but it is not bad
I love the man who looks back at me
Regardless of how I dress I am happy
Rich or poor I am what I am
Opinions are like a mirror
Reflecting my hopes and dreams

I am my reflection
Man in that mirror
Against the lighted background
God lifts my soul
Energizes me and helps me accept

I wait each moment
Making them count
Appalled by addiction
Gainfully I set each course
In touch with myself
Never without hope
End is nearly
Dead end


Trying a new form out. Hope you like

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/10/2012 9:58:00 PM
Patrick, this is a good way to start something new. keeping in touch, love you for who you are... thank you for sharing the image you imagine.. good night...pd
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Date: 4/3/2012 4:07:00 PM
Loving yourself is and amazing thing....if not to much self conceeded. This is a great poem:P <======Thinks this is lovely.
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:10:00 AM
This is a fascinating piece Patrick. I've not tried writing acrostic yet but this inspires me. - Chuck
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Date: 2/25/2012 6:04:00 PM
No matter the reflection. Externally we remain, it's the insides of us that are never the same. The roads of life are the directional flow. It's these roads of direction, in which we generally flow. <*> I like this form Patrick, label it - have a lovely Sunday <*> :)
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Date: 2/24/2012 9:26:00 PM
PATRICK, I HAVE 3 THINGS,,I DO IN THE MORNING... THE FIRST IS WALK TOWARDS MY MIRRIOR... AND YES THAN ALL KINDS OF MAGIC BEGINS... ONE THING I TRY TO ACOPLISH WHEN I LOOK IN... IS FIND HOPE IN EVERY DAY... LOVE YOUR POEM... THANK YOU FOR SHARING..PD
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:29:00 PM
rhymin is all i got, words with symetry? aint game to look in the mirror, poor ol bugger is slipping a lot:) well done mate...
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