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MIRROR IMAGE – Octogenarian plus Now Here he comes Master of the mansion – complete with wrinkles, gas, cataracts, arthritis – His mental package stuck in 30s fashion The first chore was getting out of bed Getting straight Then into his head That dreams have been scorched by light of day Talking to himself – this type insanity impending – With quiet, projective things to say - like about normal toiletry and medication all protectively arranged – Done! Then what? What indeed when highlight of the day is Going to market Slowly driving his car Remembering where in hell he parked it Cats, birds, squirrels his friends - uncomplicated you see – have become so dear, like family During his daily nap Whiskers snuggles under his arm With Tabby and Sweet Puss on his lap Ummmmmmmm? Well? There’s lots more to tell about his day But Oh, hell! Forgot what I was going to tell! By the way What IS today?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/2/2012 3:29:00 PM
awesome Daver . you got a great way about you of telling things as you experience them and thanks for your comment on my poem. Probably the only real one I will get. love ya Bob
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Date: 1/8/2012 12:03:00 PM
How witty !! Well thought out verses. Enjoyed !!
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Date: 12/20/2011 2:21:00 PM
Oh Dave once again I love this, it is so alive as you are I'm quite sure. Putting you on my favurite poets immediately. So many there forgive me if I miss sometimes!
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Date: 12/13/2011 10:10:00 AM
I should imagine many of us on Soup are in the same car you describe. You are so funny with the inevitable but that's the best way to handle it I guess. :)
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Date: 12/12/2011 12:45:00 PM
Daver, I have been having more and more "senior moments" lately and your poem had me laughing out loud. Now that I'm "retired," going to the chiropractor is often the highlight of my day. Shopping takes second place. You are so witty! Love and Christmas blessings, Carolyn
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/12/2011 12:47:00 PM
By the way, Daver, I was just yesterday telling a friend you have the voice of a 20-year-old man. Now I'd like to see your photo so we dinosaurs can commisserate. LOL
Date: 12/12/2011 8:19:00 AM
LOL, love this witty write, Daver
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Date: 12/12/2011 6:37:00 AM
Oh boy, Daver, the title is so apt, i can see myself in there. awesome this enjoyed. harry
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Date: 12/11/2011 5:05:00 PM
Got me going on this one Daver. Some of it reminds me of my day sometimes. loved this free verse . You just awesome Daver. You just awesome my friend. thanks for your cool comments love ya- Bob
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Date: 12/11/2011 12:39:00 PM
* "HAHAHAHA * DEFINITELY A TRUE REFLECTION AMID THE AGING PROCESS * MY DEAR SWEET DAVER * 'ONE DAY LIFE SHALL CARRY YOU WHERE YOU WOULD NOT GO' * I KNOW A MAN WHOM IS DEEP RESTORATION ALTHOUGH *.* NOW THIS, IS AS THE COMFORTING PET THAT WHICH I WISH TO HOLD * I LOVE YOUR HEART AS I LOVE YOUR HUMOUR AS I DO LUV YOU * DAYS UPON GOLDEN POND * VERY SWEET * HAPPY HOLIDAYS * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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