Mirror Flicker

I draw honey blowing wind 
thinking of you ore precious gift
like a snowflake pure unique
One of a kind in seventh Heaven
arriving within these eyes kissing a diamond

You're my angel rays softly touching outside
gently inside sighs the one in a thousand dreams 
Beautiful nine floating in the clouds 
singing with the silver treasuring dream lining
A beam shining over her pale full face 

Brightly pearl cut ivory and back frosted jewels
silver trails on wishes sparkle, enchants in a trance
From the vine floating bubbles burst forth
rainbow magic coloring in your light drunken treat
bursting celebrations wishes in the mind 

Dripping starlight desires your company
delightful feelings of passion burns 
Inferno of flickering flames dancing
in each warm breath touching beat
deep warmly kissing emotions
 
Budding rose craving sweet scent
new life arising stir beginnings 
so glad it's you I fall to 
Surely as the sun forever rises in the east
Replaced in my nights sailing sets direction, to my best mate

You who raise sails within me without wings
on deep tides upon this ocean waves turn over 
under the moon and stars we bathe silver
Dripping love sparkling in starry eyelids 
Jewels the dewdrops each morning speak

Upon the ground as destiny calls sweetly
embracing the echos over sands golden
lost a lone wolf howling out lonely cries
in a cold winter lunar sky 
snow lays upon the ground

Crystal true blue loving white  
in two loving arms to die for
Holding your name smiling 
breathless heart of beauty
beating with your love complete
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Date: 12/10/2014 1:02:00 PM
Dear Liam, this is indeed a very beautiful, romantic poem to be held close to ones heart. I love the warmth that it speaks of and the place this poem takes you to. Very moving pen you wrote here my dearest friend. A 7 +++for you! You're quill is golden! May you always feel the presence and the warmth of God and His angels protecting you giving you their love and strength. Keep the faith! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/13/2014 4:04:00 PM
thank you dorian for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend bless you
Date: 12/9/2014 9:55:00 PM
This takes you to another world, great write liam.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/13/2014 3:59:00 PM
thank you arthur dear pal for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 12/8/2014 10:28:00 AM
:) Well, what can I write? This is so beautiful...the imagery celestial and earthy combined. :) You have the heart of romance beating in your chest.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/8/2014 3:08:00 PM
drawing a picture of a feeling so deep eileen smiling dear friend truly wonderful comment thank you kindly bless you
Date: 12/7/2014 10:20:00 PM
This is really one of your greats Liam. It is so beautiful and flows so smoothly. I can't praise you enough.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/8/2014 7:59:00 AM
ah brenda your so sweet dear friend truly wondeerful comment dear friend bless you
Date: 12/7/2014 10:11:00 PM
So beautiful this is Liam.It feels so good to be home reading poems dear friend!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/8/2014 7:57:00 AM
charmaine nice to have you back hope the break went well for you
Date: 12/7/2014 9:15:00 PM
Hey Liam. This is a great poem. I'm a bit speechless. Wow. You should celebrate this one
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/8/2014 7:33:00 AM
thank you valerie for the dazzling comment deeply appreciated bless you
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