Mirran

Young Mirran lived in Calder wood
all of her spells were for the good
in helping out where e’er she could
But Mirran had a plan
And oft times she would sit and brood
about a mortal man

‘It’s not allowed,’ the elves all cried
‘Against our law, and woe betide
a witch who’d wish to be the bride
of mortal human men.
The bell will ring like you have died
and what will you do then?’

Her case was heard and tossed about
The coven’s vote... to cast her out,
No more a welcome here about
Bold Mirran must be gone.
‘Close the book,’ went up the shout
and so the deed was done

‘We must ring the bell, close the book,
 quench the candle,’ declared the rook
The hills around in anger shook
for Mirran was revered
but none would brave the Wizard’s look
his power ever feared 

With no more magic in her spell
And fear to hear the tolling bell
young Mirran left sweet Calder dell
in sadness to depart
But mother blessed and wished her well
and peace came to her heart

So light the candle and rejoice
The man she wed was Mirran’s choice
Fulfilled with love we hear her voice
She sings so soft and sweet
A song of thanks, rejoice, rejoice
Her mortal life complete




A Scottish stanza 
Margaret Foster Oct 7th 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Merryman Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 5:49 PM
A creative story you have told. Congrats on your poem making it to the final round of the contest! Love, Kim
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July 19, 2012 at 8:04 AM
Absolutely fabulous poem! ~Tammy~
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July 18, 2012 at 3:53 PM
I love to hear this put to music. Congrad's on your win to the first round Light & Love
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July 18, 2012 at 6:39 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Margaret. Love, Carol
Smith Avatar
July 17, 2012 at 5:51 AM
I love this story! Thank you.
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Bell, Book, and Candle" contest Margaret. Love, Carol
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October 23, 2011 at 9:55 PM
Margaret, I love this lovely tale you wove. And that is such a cute name, Dingle Wood. You are magical! Congratulations.
Johnson Avatar
October 23, 2011 at 7:12 PM
Very nice and a happy ending. Congratulations Margaret. Love, Joyce
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October 23, 2011 at 6:18 PM
Beautiful job Margaret, worthy of all honor. Agape, Moses
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October 23, 2011 at 5:43 PM
Congrats Margaret on sweet success in my contest with this dazzling delight luv...
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October 11, 2011 at 10:14 AM
Margaret. I loved this one. It had a different cadence to the rhyme which I found to be quite intriguing. Well written. Going into my favs.
Ramage Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 3:14 AM
Margaret, such a great imagination, and so creative. I like to see really original poems. Well done. I really enjoyed your poem. Take care Lee
Lane Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 7:47 AM
I never say this because I seldom know what I'm talking about but I loved the rythm of this poem. Thank you. Tony
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