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Miraculous Flight

I am a bird in miraculous flight Looking down upon everything in sight As the land rushes by, I take a look Flowing like the water in the brook I am free, breathing air in the sky A natural ability, I don’t question why I land where I choose, flying down below I watch the actions of the fellow crow This creation is my precious home to explore When I fly each flight, I need nothing more Heidi Sands 5/30/22

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Date: 6/2/2022 8:06:00 PM
You have reignited in me the envy of my fellow birds! Unfortunately, I do not fly very high. Oh, well. ~ Bird-brain
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/3/2022 5:46:00 AM
Lol. Thank you Gershon :)
Date: 5/31/2022 9:33:00 PM
Beautifully crafted ! Enjoyed your flight Heidi ! All the Best in the contest !
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Heidi Sands
Date: 6/1/2022 4:41:00 AM
Thank you very much Valsa. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 5/31/2022 6:50:00 PM
Exquisitely written personification, Heidi. I really enjoyed reading it, best wishes with the contest.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2022 8:08:00 PM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 5/30/2022 1:29:00 PM
Among the wonders of nature. Enjoyed the flight.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2022 1:43:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I am happy you enjoyed it. I would like to take a flight right now! :)
Date: 5/30/2022 12:14:00 PM
No wonder angels choose them:) Very beautiful, Heidi. Love it!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2022 12:22:00 PM
Thank you very much Joe :)
Date: 5/30/2022 9:52:00 AM
Stunning personification, dearest, Heidi. Liked it! Blessings.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2022 12:22:00 PM
Thank you very much Demetrios. I am happy you like it :)
Date: 5/30/2022 8:22:00 AM
Wouldn't it be amazing if we could fly like a bird seeing the world from above. Good luck in the contest Heidi. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2022 8:54:00 AM
Yes, it would be. I have thought about that often Tom. I hope you have a nice day. Thank you very much :)

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