Miraculous Creation

In the dark of Night, the celestial beauty of the universe comes into its own, illuminating the firmament. Galaxies, still in the throes of the Big Bang, swirl in an infinite sea of ebony. And shooting stars, sojourners to Earth; weave, visual threads into the fabric of time and space. Chamaeleon clouds bleeding red at the horizon's cutting-edge hang low, so as not to besmirch the grandeur of Night. And Venus, like the mythical Goddess of beauty, outshines the stars; rising between Mercury and Earth, She lingers in regal repose; caught within gravity's invisible currents. A colony of bats spirals into the air, like a phoenix rising from the ashes of a spent sun. And a chill runs down my spine as I stand in awe, in the presence of God's miraculous creation.
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La France Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 1:48 PM
Emile, congratulations on your top win in Laura's contest with this beautiful write, well done !
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Scars Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 6:21 AM
what a great usage of all 8 words dear Emile! This astounded me from beginning to end, thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Pinet Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Thank you Laura, I appreciate your visits my friend, you honor me, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Back with congrats on your top win.
Pinet Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Gentry Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:12 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this beautiful poem!
Pinet Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 7:25 AM
Thank you Susan, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Great use of the 8 words and, Emile , with great inspirational imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 7:25 AM
Thank you Eve, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:00 AM
Another top win Emile, you definitely know what I like and always end up at the top!
Pinet Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Thank you so much John, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
May 31, 2018 at 2:20 PM
Well done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Thank you Line, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.
Cunningham Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 1:27 PM
Indeed it is Emile, I often Venture out on a dark night and gaze up at that ' immaculate conception' Brilliant write. Good luck. Tom
Pinet Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Thank you so much Tom, your words brought a smile to my heart my friend, Emile.
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