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Miraculous

When I was in Portugal, I fell in love,
            When I was in Spain, I felt that love all over again.
                    Miraculous, charming, unbelievable!
                Where was all this love hidden for so long!
               I was desperate, I was crazy! All in my mind
               was one thought - I love you with everything.


                                       

                                      May 16, 2021
         Inspired by " Surprise Me" Poetry Contest (6 lines maximum)
                      Modified from " When I was in Portugal"
                                   Sponsor: Line Gauthier
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 1:13 PM
"Love" this write and picture. Love is a wonderful thing. Have a blessed day writing away................
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 1:24 PM
True - love is a wonderful thing. Thanks, Paula.
Alex Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 7:23 AM
Such a beautiful short poem!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 8:09 AM
Thanks, Dear Poet. Appreciate your comment.
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