Miracle

I work for things deemed sensible and avoid the junk dispensable while seeking what's appreciable to learn just what's achievable while backwards reprehensible where everything's disposable and all that's left that's savable is garbage that's recyclable So say a prayer that's plausible and hold mankind accountable to keep your faith believable that there's a God perceivable

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Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 6/26/2014 9:25:00 PM

Very creative and very plausible. Love this masterpiece! Flawless and powerful yet very realistic. Thank you for sharing!

Mark Peterson

Date: 4/21/2014 2:28:00 PM

Lovely word play, Trevor and difficult form to sustain, but I am pleased you did it so well. Check out the definition for monorhyme.

Trevor Mcleod
Date: 4/21/2014 9:29:00 PM

Isn't that strange. The style I chose to do is named. Thanks for mentioning the Monorhyme Mark. I'm always surprised that all the forms of poetry exist and are not subcategorized. Still; it's nice to know expression is limitless. Thanks for your comment Mark. Always a pleasure to hear from you.

Mel Merrill

Date: 4/11/2014 12:18:00 AM

Hi Trevor. I like this poem. Great wordplay and a great message delivered in a fun way. Nicely done, my friend. Peace // mel

Trevor Mcleod
Date: 4/11/2014 2:01:00 AM

Thanks Mel. It's really not one of my better poems; but it's an attempt to try this style of rhyming every line. Usually I avoid too much rhyme. I enjoyed your quatrain and couplet poems. I see you're always trying new styles. I'll have to try some different styles too. Hope to read more of your poetry to come Mel. Nice to see a gifted poet flourish as you are doing. Thanks. -Trevor