Minuanetta- Your Love Is Like a Reverie

Your LOVE is like an adoring reverie,
               like pebbles on a shore you surface me-
Like a tide in the sand you set me free,
     you bring healing to this heart’s TRIBUTARY.
You flow through me like a tender memory. 

       I need you like a babbling brook of infatuation, 
in REVERENCE to the stream of our veneration-
              You bring a watercourse of life’s inspiration 
and ease with a sincere CURRENT of alleviation. 

           There’s a deluge running through my veins, 
 now only a waterway of LOYALTY remains-
             You are mother nature’s beauty my heart contains. 

      We share a fluvial flow of a lover’s CONNECTION,
             an aqueous cascade showering me with affection. 

The slightest touch of your hand sends a piety of EMOTION.

           This flux in motion has caused such flattery, 
                       making me so GRATEFUL for your beloved creation-
               Each time you caress me my soul obtains
                     a meandering stream of pure perfection. 
                                      For your love is like a reverie of DEVOTION. 




January 27th, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 4/30/2018 1:57:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win. Beautifully flowing piece.
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Date: 4/29/2018 3:10:00 PM
Beautiful :)
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Date: 4/29/2018 2:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement win. I enjoyed reading this, rhythm and rhyme were awesome. An amazing minuanetta about love. :)
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Date: 4/29/2018 2:05:00 PM
This is so romantic and charming, with exquisite phrasing and metaphor, Luloo, and I adore the water connection for your chremamorphism. You commanded the form AND the rhyme like you'd always known it, and created such a lovely story with it - just LOVE this one! Congratulations on your placement, and thank you for entering my contest! :-)
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Date: 4/29/2018 8:06:00 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Laura.
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Date: 4/29/2018 12:58:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your win. Nicely flowing poem of heart.
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Date: 3/11/2018 7:55:00 PM
Lovely write, Laura, the waterways to love ; luck in the contest Hugs
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Date: 1/29/2018 2:29:00 PM
Well done Laura, I know for me it wasn't easy to have a collection of sentences rhyme in order, you seem to have done it well...good luck
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Date: 1/27/2018 9:03:00 PM
Very romantic, Laura. GL
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Date: 1/27/2018 5:57:00 PM
Really nice, Laura. You can almost hear a tinkling classical piano.
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Date: 1/27/2018 2:55:00 PM
I have no idea where to start with this contest LuLoo - your lines flow so beautifully good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/27/2018 1:48:00 PM
Your love is like a waterfall LuLoo, good going and best wishes...
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