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Minster Lovell (Repost)

The Minster's quiet grace speaks of a time when life was simple, kinsfolk came to pray for hope within this haven so sublime that famine and disease be kept at bay. The temple thrives to prove the power of God, it bests the test, as celebrants have trod her cloistered precincts dressed in robe and cowl to swell His praise through seasons fair and foul. Today we slay and maim all in His name people whose God displays another face; we trample on chaste values and defame this land we hold so dear, to our disgrace. His church endures, the crumbling structure stands, a shrine of truth on time's all-weathered hill; shall we learn life's lesson, hold in our hands the answer, or will it elude us still?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/22/2012 2:40:00 PM
This gave me such a jolt when reading; reminds me of the hypocrisy of the ministers involved in the care or destruction (better word) of our idigenous people here. What a bizarre fraud they are and they get away with it!
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Date: 4/11/2009 10:39:00 AM
This has a feel of Betjeman to it. I like the portrait style that you use, not to present an individual but a congregation. the rhyme and alliteration use gives the poem a melodic feel. however I am not sure about some of the punctuation.
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