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Minnos

You went away, you left me I can't understand why Why did you go away? Why did you die? My heart it is breaking My life's upside down In thoughtsand unhappiness I'm beginning to drown You were found on the railway A train had hit you I feel so damn helpless What can I do I need to face what's happening Your gone and that is that Im going to really miss you My darling pet cat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/17/2009 10:48:00 AM
Dear Marnie, Our pets give us unconditional love. That is their gift to us and that is why we grieve so much. The greater the love the greater the grief. In time, it will pass and you will be left with precious memories that will make you smile. Wonferful tribute! Love and peace, lainie
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Date: 1/14/2009 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week...Raul
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Date: 1/12/2009 7:50:00 AM
Congrats Marnie on the featuring of "Minnos." Vince
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Date: 1/12/2009 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2009 2:29:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/11/2009 1:34:00 PM
oh...so sad! Well done...congratulations on this sweet poem being a featured work this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/11/2009 12:25:00 PM
Aww, so sad to read again. Congratulations on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/19/2008 1:49:00 PM
The loss of an animal... a pet... is always so diffficult to cope with. I have undergone the same loss... I feel for you. God bless, Keith
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