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Minimalist

Minimal

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Yester
day
child
hood
lost


Hats
off
to
sad
ness

angelappreciationbutterflydestinyhopefree verse

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

July 26, 2018 at 9:05 PM

Brevity at it's short breath best, Art! Smooth telescoped life write. Love and joy always.

Viv Wigley

July 22, 2018 at 1:07 AM

I shaved off some of my childhood's coat and take it with me, Arthur. Do stupid stuff, and childhood will remember you. Nice write. regards, Viv

Emile Pinet

July 20, 2018 at 12:05 PM

A little melancholy, with a slow pace that entraps the reader into your emotional flow. Emile.

Harry Horsman

July 19, 2018 at 3:06 PM

Most of the human race yearn for some kind of childhood, interesting poem,arthur

Eve Roper

July 19, 2018 at 9:42 AM

:) Hugs Eve

Joseph May

July 17, 2018 at 4:55 PM

Well expressed Arthur, best wishes

Nette Onclaud

July 17, 2018 at 3:07 PM

love the undertones of childhood's emptiness... you crushed it, arthur...huggs

Jan Allison

July 17, 2018 at 2:15 PM

so few words say so much and I love that pic:-) still think you are a creative genius!:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

July 17, 2018 at 1:39 PM

EwA

Arturo Michael

July 17, 2018 at 1:00 PM

After all..at the grave yard...all will be bare...Nice imagery...All the best Arthur

Charlie Smith

July 17, 2018 at 10:34 AM

A shame indeed, well done Arthur...

Lyric Man

July 17, 2018 at 7:53 AM

A thought provoking piece, Arthur.. the play on the title sets it all up. The poem itself is then indeed minimalist. But the meditative Muse to follow lingers on...