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Minimal List Yester day child hood lost Hats off to sad ness

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Date: 7/26/2018 9:05:00 PM
Brevity at it's short breath best, Art! Smooth telescoped life write. Love and joy always.
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Date: 7/22/2018 1:07:00 AM
I shaved off some of my childhood's coat and take it with me, Arthur. Do stupid stuff, and childhood will remember you. Nice write. regards, Viv
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Date: 7/20/2018 12:05:00 PM
A little melancholy, with a slow pace that entraps the reader into your emotional flow. Emile.
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Date: 7/19/2018 3:06:00 PM
Most of the human race yearn for some kind of childhood, interesting poem,arthur
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Date: 7/19/2018 9:42:00 AM
:) Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/19/2018 8:43:00 AM
Aww, give yourself a few years, your second childhood is around the corner complete with diapers.
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Date: 7/17/2018 4:55:00 PM
Well expressed Arthur, best wishes
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Date: 7/17/2018 3:07:00 PM
love the undertones of childhood's emptiness... you crushed it, arthur...huggs
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Date: 7/17/2018 2:15:00 PM
so few words say so much and I love that pic:-) still think you are a creative genius!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/17/2018 1:39:00 PM
EwA
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Date: 7/17/2018 1:00:00 PM
After all..at the grave yard...all will be bare...Nice imagery...All the best Arthur
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Date: 7/17/2018 10:34:00 AM
A shame indeed, well done Arthur...
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Date: 7/17/2018 7:53:00 AM
A thought provoking piece, Arthur.. the play on the title sets it all up. The poem itself is then indeed minimalist. But the meditative Muse to follow lingers on...
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Date: 7/17/2018 12:12:00 AM
You get minimal praise by me :) Cool poem, and I love that tree there.
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