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Yester
day
child
hood
lost


Hats
off
to
sad
ness

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/26/2018 9:05:00 PM

Brevity at it's short breath best, Art! Smooth telescoped life write. Love and joy always.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/22/2018 1:07:00 AM

I shaved off some of my childhood's coat and take it with me, Arthur. Do stupid stuff, and childhood will remember you. Nice write. regards, Viv

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/20/2018 12:05:00 PM

A little melancholy, with a slow pace that entraps the reader into your emotional flow. Emile.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/19/2018 3:06:00 PM

Most of the human race yearn for some kind of childhood, interesting poem,arthur

Eve Roper

Date: 7/19/2018 9:42:00 AM

:) Hugs Eve

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2018 8:43:00 AM

Aww, give yourself a few years, your second childhood is around the corner complete with diapers.

Joseph May

Date: 7/17/2018 4:55:00 PM

Well expressed Arthur, best wishes

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/17/2018 3:07:00 PM

love the undertones of childhood's emptiness... you crushed it, arthur...huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 7/17/2018 2:15:00 PM

so few words say so much and I love that pic:-) still think you are a creative genius!:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/17/2018 1:39:00 PM

EwA

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/17/2018 1:00:00 PM

After all..at the grave yard...all will be bare...Nice imagery...All the best Arthur

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/17/2018 10:34:00 AM

A shame indeed, well done Arthur...

Lyric Man

Date: 7/17/2018 7:53:00 AM

A thought provoking piece, Arthur.. the play on the title sets it all up. The poem itself is then indeed minimalist. But the meditative Muse to follow lingers on...