Home » Poems » Subimal Sinha-Roy » Minimalist - Closed Path

Minimalist - Closed Path

Searched you in dark outside The road ended in despair The journey lost in confusion Discovered an open door within Lighted, you’re defined for me. October 18, 2017. Contest : Minimalist Form

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2017 6:48:00 PM

many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/22/2017 10:56:00 PM

Thank you, Jan.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/21/2017 5:52:00 PM

Subimal, congratulations on your win well done.. :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/22/2017 10:55:00 PM

Thank you Eve for visiting.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/21/2017 5:40:00 PM

a well-deserved placement for finely expressed piece, suminal... best congrats and thanks for entering this challenge...

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/22/2017 10:55:00 PM

Thank you, Nette for your appreciatiion.

Rhoma Em

Date: 10/18/2017 11:03:00 AM

Amazing short poem. The beginning and middle parts are well woven though I couldn't understand the last line. Thank you.

Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/22/2017 10:54:00 PM

Thank you, Rhoma for visiting.